Haha~ you don't know what to say, but still your comment is that long! ^^ *snuggles*
I actually liked Minako, that's why I couldn't just get rid of her easily. I think this way I showed that she really was a good girl and probably a perfect match for a Johnny's boy, since she was quite understandiing and mature. But, for Kazuya, there's no perfect match other than Jin of course *löl* No, seriously, I wanted to make sure she and Kazuya would part like this. Though, of course, not listening to him and believing in her own truth makes her a bit naive and stubborn, but I also think that makes her human and just a normal girl beside being so understanding and demure.
Do you think Jin's was lacking? *löl* I thought in this and the last chapter he rather was the complete opposite of what he used to be. He's much calmer and even more careful. He called Koki in the last chapter and as he called Kazuya in this, he didn't say anything because Koki was with him. XD But well, sure, he's careful with taking another step, while Kazuya moves into his direction again. But, after all, before this it was Kazuya who wouldn't allow Jin to get near him. So, it really switched XD
I was actually really, really satisfied with the first part. The way they lay together at the bed and Kazuya was like gently playing with their fingers. I think it had quite a sweet atmosphere. I want to keep that sweetness up for the ending, actually. That's what I'm planning, at least. I hope things will work out the way I want them to *laugh*
Yes, sorry @__@;; Of course I could always point out superficial things I like or don't like - but this time I thought there was nothing in depth for me to say... like sharing my thoughts on a development or specific feelings, order of events, whatever. That's probably because in general this wasn't too "new" and rather spinning on the yarn from the chapter before - which is good of course! XD
May I say that I wouldn't have expected anything less from you? ^^ You're such a kind person and you've put so much passion in this story, I didn't think you would simply drop or kick out a character you carefully created and involved (^-^)v
Yes, yes, of course Jin's not so impulsive anymore because he's more careful and calm and maybe tries to behave more rational. 8) Yet, because this chapter was rather from Kazuya's pov (feeling-wise) it feels as if Jin's lacking emotion, so this creates this kind of switch where he appears to be the one blocking out now XDD Now I wonder: Is he really just oh so very careful, or is he slowly resigning and accepting his fate of having no chance forevermore? ^O^ Must read next chapter, must read! *wiggles hysterically* x')) *löl*
Agreed, that was very sweet! And if you're planning to go on this sweetly... ugh... what elese can I ask for?! *__* Yay~ go ooon! XD *cheers for you*
Sure, I'd always hug you, ne?! ^__^ *doesn't let you go* <333
*snuggles*
I actually liked Minako, that's why I couldn't just get rid of her easily. I think this way I showed that she really was a good girl and probably a perfect match for a Johnny's boy, since she was quite understandiing and mature. But, for Kazuya, there's no perfect match other than Jin of course *löl*
No, seriously, I wanted to make sure she and Kazuya would part like this. Though, of course, not listening to him and believing in her own truth makes her a bit naive and stubborn, but I also think that makes her human and just a normal girl beside being so understanding and demure.
Do you think Jin's was lacking? *löl* I thought in this and the last chapter he rather was the complete opposite of what he used to be. He's much calmer and even more careful. He called Koki in the last chapter and as he called Kazuya in this, he didn't say anything because Koki was with him. XD
But well, sure, he's careful with taking another step, while Kazuya moves into his direction again. But, after all, before this it was Kazuya who wouldn't allow Jin to get near him.
So, it really switched XD
I was actually really, really satisfied with the first part. The way they lay together at the bed and Kazuya was like gently playing with their fingers. I think it had quite a sweet atmosphere.
I want to keep that sweetness up for the ending, actually. That's what I'm planning, at least. I hope things will work out the way I want them to *laugh*
Hug me, hug me!!
*holds you close*
<3333
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Of course I could always point out superficial things I like or don't like - but this time I thought there was nothing in depth for me to say... like sharing my thoughts on a development or specific feelings, order of events, whatever. That's probably because in general this wasn't too "new" and rather spinning on the yarn from the chapter before - which is good of course! XD
May I say that I wouldn't have expected anything less from you? ^^ You're such a kind person and you've put so much passion in this story, I didn't think you would simply drop or kick out a character you carefully created and involved (^-^)v
Yes, yes, of course Jin's not so impulsive anymore because he's more careful and calm and maybe tries to behave more rational. 8) Yet, because this chapter was rather from Kazuya's pov (feeling-wise) it feels as if Jin's lacking emotion, so this creates this kind of switch where he appears to be the one blocking out now XDD Now I wonder: Is he really just oh so very careful, or is he slowly resigning and accepting his fate of having no chance forevermore? ^O^ Must read next chapter, must read! *wiggles hysterically* x')) *löl*
Agreed, that was very sweet! And if you're planning to go on this sweetly... ugh... what elese can I ask for?! *__* Yay~ go ooon! XD *cheers for you*
Sure, I'd always hug you, ne?! ^__^
*doesn't let you go* <333
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