[Fanfiction:] Fade into the Background - Second Flashback

[yumiko_okahawa]

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[blazingeternity]

HNNNNNNNNNNNNNG!!!

Stopping right there where my heart stopped! How indescribably cruel of you! How, how could you! >.<
I already told you several times how it always amazes me to no end how you twist and turn the events throughout the whole story. I feel as if although I know what's supposed to stand at the very end, I cannot predict what's going to happen next... because just a half step before that what I expect happens, you turn around! STILL it makes sense and feels so right! Really, I'm going to tell you this over and over again XD You're probably already annoyed *rofl*

Anyway, this was short, torturingly short; but so very exciting... First I was just reading attentively, almost alerted, then "It was the fakest smile Jin had ever seen." I hold my breath and then when it was Koki who interrupted my eyes would have fallen out and bounced over the keyboard if that would have been possible XD
Oh oh oh, this was an amazing move of yours! I'm literally dying to read the next O_O

GO, SHAI GOOOO~~~!!! *______*// <333

[yumiko_okahawa]

XD That's what it was supposed to be like ^^ I'm working on the next one... I hope I can update on Sunday, I'm really, really behind v.v

I'm glad you like it and thanks for the compliment!
and yay for Koki! Haha, of course I wanted everyone to think Jin was the one to interrupt and then it was "only" Koki ^^ Hihi~
So, Kazuya ran away from his wedding, but it'll take some more chapters before we'll find out why and if Jin is able to find him and what they'll do then!

Gooo~ XD *runs*
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[blazingeternity]

So, Kazuya ran away from his wedding, but it'll take some more chapters before we'll find out why and if Jin is able to find him and what they'll do then!

Why was I so expecting that!? XD XD
But really, of course we're all dying to read how it goes on, still you shouldn't be put under pressure! o_o

Don't say "only" Koki >o< here I was thinking he would be going "Nooo Kazuya, -I- love you!!" and thereby crush the very last bits left of Jin O_O I'm so emo, I always expect the worst v.v *hm*

*stumbles after you* XD ...happy easter~!!! *shares easter cake* luveeey ~♥~

[bondage_soup]

okay. right now. my heart is not beating xD if now i kneel down and start begging... okay... probably it wont make you to write/share the next chappie gigasuperfast right? XDDD no.. i'm just kiddin... i really enjoy your story , it's just soooooooooo PURE LUV AND OMG XD okay.. i stopped.. it doesn' make sense xD thax for sharing, and i luv ya, and thank you, and CHUUU~

[yumiko_okahawa]

I'm giving my best to update as soon as possible ^^ I've started the new chapter but it's not done yet v.v

Thanks so much for reading and commenting ♥

[snow_meow]

About time!!

Koki yelling stop and cursing at church is so funny. I can imagine how panicked he looked.

I guess in some way God granted Jin's wish.

Now we have a runaway bridegroom and I cannot wait for the next chapter.

[yumiko_okahawa]

Hihi, yeees... I guess my the character of my Koki in this story is quite similar to his role in "tatta hitostu no Koi", isn't it? But it suits him so well XD

Thanks for reading! ^___^

[aki_88]

mouuuu~

my heart is beating erratically and then the story stop there. T__T

Love this chap nonetheless. Thanks for sharing with us.

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[yumiko_okahawa]

Thanks so much for commenting ^^ I'm glad you like it that much and it had the right effect on you ^.~

[wendy138]

Run Jin, move those legs! Update soon please. :)

[yumiko_okahawa]

Run, Jin, run! ^o^
As soon as possible, promise!!!!