I don't quite get how you can write such actually happy things and still make me terribly, terribly sad. Is it really the last line that shattered every lovey-doveyness this chapter had built up before? Is it the way the switch in the POV reveals how they're kind of "feeling past each other"? Or is it simply the fact that one reads all this already knowing that everything is bound to break and crumble in one way or another and make space for the wedding?
I'm pretty clueless. All the time before I thought if it's going to turn out like this it'll be a happy, satisfying moment... but after all *scratches head* there's still some darkness lingering in the corners. Maybe it's just me, but I find this chapter pretty emotional and once again important for the development of their characters/relationship. Still it scares me even more to see how it will turn out in the end. And please let me compliment on the last scene, I thought it had a nice pace and fit everything that was before just so well. To quote it, it felt righthaaah... *sighs
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Oh don't worry xD A long time ago I came to realize that things and people I can't cry about don't touch me at all. And whatever's unable to touch me doesn't mean anything to me. And I don't care about things that have no meaning to me <.< So it's rather this kind of sadness - which is somehow a good thing then *smiles*
Ah, I didn't expect it would ever get revealed why he didn't answer, I thought it was rather... that Kazuya just fell asleep not seeing any necissity to return the sentence and it was only Jin's subconscience that made him feel like "My confession stayed unanswered". *scratches head* actually I really think many relationships fall apart or never get started because of such unspoken things/misunderstandings. People tend to subconsciously pay too much attention to things the other person doesn't even notice and in their head they figure out their own answers and let it all go down although, in reality, everything was just fine xP Okay, this isn't really related to your story but that's what I think in general +__
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Thanks so lot, hon, also for the mail you've written before!!! ^^ I'm so relieved you like it! ^_^ I really but a lot of effort into this to make at least a little bit special. To make it a loving chapter, though it already announces that things won't stay like that between them v.v
Thanks so much for saying this! I'm really picky with what I let Jin say *laughs* It's sometimes difficult to keep his image up and not to make him to one of my characters, you know? *löl*
I know he did, and I'm sure he started to have fun doing that game after a while XD MatsuJun dragged him into it, I'm sure *LÖL*
Honto ni???? Are you serious about this? If you are, I'm really, really honoured. As I've said I put a lot of effort, and I'm so glad it didn't sound cheap to you! *hugs you*
well that was amazingly cute i absolutely loved it! it was all absolutely brilliant! i loved it! the kisses, the touches, the explanations, all of it! i loved it! the description for the kisses were so so SO cute. i love 'the brushing of lips' and there was so much of it! and others like it ^O^ did i mention yet that i loved it? i'll try and calm myself now... ^_____________^
Thanks so much! Those words mean a lot to me, since there are not that many people reading this fanfiction, so I'm so glad if those people reading actually like it! ^__^ I really tried to make it a good chapter, with a lot of emotions and feelings in it, so I'm glad it had the right effect on you!
Well, we'll still have two chapters to go before we're back in the present time. And I'm afraid Jin won't get any help then... at least not from Mr Fairy~ XD
I gradually fell in love with this fic in each chapter. Beautiful writing. I feel happy, brushed, sad and a little gloomy at the same time while thinking about Kazuya's wedding.
I like when Jin told Pin to sleep, and she rest his head to Ran-chan. So so so cute ^^
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Is it really the last line that shattered every lovey-doveyness this chapter had built up before? Is it the way the switch in the POV reveals how they're kind of "feeling past each other"? Or is it simply the fact that one reads all this already knowing that everything is bound to break and crumble in one way or another and make space for the wedding?
I'm pretty clueless. All the time before I thought if it's going to turn out like this it'll be a happy, satisfying moment... but after all *scratches head* there's still some darkness lingering in the corners.
Maybe it's just me, but I find this chapter pretty emotional and once again important for the development of their characters/relationship. Still it scares me even more to see how it will turn out in the end.
And please let me compliment on the last scene, I thought it had a nice pace and fit everything that was before just so well. To quote it, it felt righthaaah... *sighs ( ... )
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So it's rather this kind of sadness - which is somehow a good thing then *smiles*
Ah, I didn't expect it would ever get revealed why he didn't answer, I thought it was rather... that Kazuya just fell asleep not seeing any necissity to return the sentence and it was only Jin's subconscience that made him feel like "My confession stayed unanswered". *scratches head* actually I really think many relationships fall apart or never get started because of such unspoken things/misunderstandings. People tend to subconsciously pay too much attention to things the other person doesn't even notice and in their head they figure out their own answers and let it all go down although, in reality, everything was just fine xP Okay, this isn't really related to your story but that's what I think in general +__ ( ... )
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Thanks so much for saying this! I'm really picky with what I let Jin say *laughs* It's sometimes difficult to keep his image up and not to make him to one of my characters, you know? *löl*
I know he did, and I'm sure he started to have fun doing that game after a while XD MatsuJun dragged him into it, I'm sure *LÖL*
Honto ni???? Are you serious about this? If you are, I'm really, really honoured. As I've said I put a lot of effort, and I'm so glad it didn't sound cheap to you!
*hugs you*
Thanks so much, love <3<3<3<3
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i absolutely loved it!
it was all absolutely brilliant!
i loved it!
the kisses, the touches, the explanations, all of it!
i loved it!
the description for the kisses were so so SO cute. i love 'the brushing of lips' and there was so much of it! and others like it ^O^
did i mention yet that i loved it?
i'll try and calm myself now... ^_____________^
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Thanks so much! Those words mean a lot to me, since there are not that many people reading this fanfiction, so I'm so glad if those people reading actually like it! ^__^
I really tried to make it a good chapter, with a lot of emotions and feelings in it, so I'm glad it had the right effect on you!
Thank you so much for your comment <3
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Thanks for reading and commententin ^_^
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I'll give my best to make it one ^_
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I like when Jin told Pin to sleep, and she rest his head to Ran-chan. So so so cute ^^
looking forward to reading next chapter soon >.<
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I'll try my best to update as soon as possible!!
Thanks so much for commenting!!! ^_^
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