[Fanfic] Fade into the Background

[yumiko_okahawa]

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[kynseidk]

jin~ to the rescue. :)

[yumiko_okahawa]

Hihi, yes~ ^^
Thanks for reading and commenting ♥

[kirei_shinigami]

oh my god!
T_T i feel bad kame got a telling off from tackey but i figured tackey was just doing it to push kame harder into proving his worth and ability...but still, it made me cry...T_T...im glad jin always reassures him...i'm glad jin's there to keep him happy and secured. ^^,

[yumiko_okahawa]

mah, I didn't mean to make you sad!!!
Yes, gladly Jin could make him feel better..~

However, thanks for reading and leaving me a comment again! ^^ <3<3<3<3

[kirei_shinigami]

saa...
im so excited with how this fic turns out.
^__^

[yumiko_okahawa]

Aw, yes, it took me quite long to get this up. But coming home and such... I was a nlittle busy ^^;
But it'll go on better from now on! ^^

Yeah, I thought so, too. I'm almost through with the next one and I suppose it's much longer than the ones before. There was so much happening that had to be in that chap *laughs* ^^

*huggies*
Thanks for keeping up with me, hon.
I'll send you the new one as soon as it's finished <3
Love you ♥

[snow_meow]

This chapter show how important Jin is to Kame without him realizing it.

I would like to ask a favour.
If possible, please break up your fic into many different paragraphs.

It is really difficult to read long paragraphs with so much dialogue that flows non-stop.

Also, it would be a good idea to leave more spacing between the sentences as it makes it easier to read.

Thank you.

[yumiko_okahawa]

Heyaaa ^^ Thanks for reading and commenting <3

And yes, I thought about that already. I recently changed my layout. It was fine with the old one to post like this, but... well, with this one everything seems so pressed together, ne?
I'll find a solution for that from the next chapter on! Promise!

Thanks again <3 ^^

[yumiko_okahawa]

Yeah, at this state Jin's still capable of making Kame feel better.. ^^
But for the next chapters it won't change, I think ^o^ <3

Thanks a lot, love *huggies*
<3<33<3