All Growed Up
Yeah, so I've finally re-written the story I did for Billie Jukes' All Growed Up. I wrote the original a couple of years ago, but finally got enough thought put into it and a satisfactory flow to it. i also think I managed to create perspective a little more properly...? Or at least, I was desperately hoping I did. I tried to moreso pass the scene off from one character's perspective (Ran's) to another (Conan/Shinichi's) without it being overly abrupt.
Anyway, please check it out and help me improve my writing?
summary: Ai's finally found the cure for Apotoxin 4698. Too bad the Shonen tantei thought it was candy. What's Shinichi to do with a 17 year old Ayumi, Mistuhiko, and Genta?’ Plunnie owned by Billie Jukes, not Beta'd.
Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5243983/1/All_Growed_Up
Anyway, please check it out and help me improve my writing?
summary: Ai's finally found the cure for Apotoxin 4698. Too bad the Shonen tantei thought it was candy. What's Shinichi to do with a 17 year old Ayumi, Mistuhiko, and Genta?’ Plunnie owned by Billie Jukes, not Beta'd.
Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5243983/1/All_Growed_Up