Heroes: "Nothing Left to Live For" (Peter/Candice, R)

Aug 18, 2007 01:05

Title: Nothing Left to Live For
Author: airspaniel
Rating: R
Pairing: Peter/Candice
Word Count: 1680
Spoilers: "How to Stop an Exploding Man"
Notes: Written as surprise gift!fic for paynesgrey, and because I feel angsty as all hell tonight.

Summary: Peter is tormented by his actions, and is found by a woman with a death wish.

Peter lay curled up in the middle of the hotel bed, staring blankly at the garish watercolor landscape on the opposite wall. )

heroes, peter/candice

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paynesgrey August 18 2007, 05:37:50 UTC
GUUUUUUHHHHHHHHH. OMG you have no idea how much I love you right now. *sob* THIS WAS SO AWESOME!
It's exactly what I wanted. THANK YOU THANK YOU!
What do you want? something? anything?
That was so hot. GUH. Thank you.
You are AWESOME SAUCE.

Buttons flew as he ripped her blouse open, kissing the bruises he had left on her neck, trailing down across her black lace clad breasts.

That's my girl, Candice! Seriously, this was so awesome. I can't thank you enough. *worships*

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paynesgrey August 18 2007, 05:38:23 UTC
And I was so enamored my HTML totally f'ed up there, but there you go... THANK YOU!

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airspaniel August 18 2007, 05:43:07 UTC
LOL! It's okay, I understand. And I'm SO GLAD YOU LIKE IT!! ^____^ I was hoping it would be somewhere in the ballpark of what you were looking for.

I love it when you say "guh." ^_^

And, um... Draw me something! How's that for specific instructions? ^_~ Seriously, I love getting art. Anything you want is fine with me, but if you wanted to draw something inspired by one of my fics I would be beyond psyched.

THANK YOU!! ^_^

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paynesgrey August 18 2007, 05:47:04 UTC
You got it. Will do.
I'll figure out something from one of your stories. I might get a little behind, but I'll have it done for you definitely. *don't beat me*

But this fic is certainly inspirational. *ahhhhh* ^_^

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meli_64 August 18 2007, 05:40:25 UTC
Great mate. Really great fic. :D

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airspaniel August 18 2007, 05:47:00 UTC
Wow, thank you! ^_^

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devorgila August 18 2007, 06:33:54 UTC
Angsty and sexy, that was brilliant.

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airspaniel August 18 2007, 12:06:25 UTC
Thank you!

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cindergirlgrimm August 18 2007, 07:00:52 UTC
hee, I love dark Peter. And I'mm a little bit drunk right now so I love hime more. PLease forgive any spelling malfuntions...

I love the idea of Candice showing up as Nathan and you write it so well. It's a beautifully written piece and could work so easily in or out of canon which is awesome.

And thant "I thought you'd be taller" line, was it inspired by Buffy?

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airspaniel August 18 2007, 12:08:21 UTC
Hee! No problem. ^_^ Thank you very much!

And no, I never really watched Buffy. ^^;; It was sort of inspired by a story I wrote for a friend a few years ago.

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cindergirlgrimm August 18 2007, 19:29:44 UTC
hee, nice icon...

I actually had to go back and re-read the story cause I didn't remember all of it -yeah, I was that wasted and decided to use my computer, smart huh?- Again, I really like the fact that it could work in or out of canon and I like that you touch on what Candice could be like w/ the death of Linderman.

The whole Buffy thing is actually from the pilot (Welcome to the Hellmouth) when she first meets Angel and he says he thought she'd be taller. The way you wrote it just automatically makes me think of that scene.

Anyway, uh, sorry for reviewing while drunk though it looks a little amusing... And I've read several of your other stories and you are an awesome writer! Thanks for putting it out there=)

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airspaniel August 19 2007, 01:36:33 UTC
Hey, I find that drunken internetting is often the most enjoyable. So don't sweat it, I do it all the time. ^_^

And thank you so much! That's really sweet of you. *^_^*

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indyhat August 18 2007, 07:59:26 UTC
I like! I mean, I'm not much for het, but damn, the bit with Nathan and ... aiiii :)

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airspaniel August 18 2007, 12:10:11 UTC
Thank you! That means a lot. ^_^

Do you know I've never seriously written Petrellicest? THIS IS A TRAVESTY THAT I MUST REMEDY. 0.o

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indyhat August 18 2007, 15:15:21 UTC
FIX THIZ PLZ K THX

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rawthorne August 18 2007, 17:47:44 UTC
Hot and dark. And pretty. Very pretty.

I wasn't expecting to like this pairing as much as I did. There's something about broken!Peter and Candice that just makes sense, though.

I loved. (and added to memories)

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airspaniel August 19 2007, 01:38:44 UTC
I have to admit I never really considered the two of them until paynesgrey mentioned it on her lj, and then I was like... "yeah, this totally is working for me." ^_^

Thsnk you very much! ^__^

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