Me without you Chapter 10 (Junba, Sakumiya)

[lilly0]

Title: Me without you 10/?
Pairing: Junba (main!), Sakumiya, Ohno/?, others possible
Rating: up to R
Genre: AU, romance
Plot: Although they are both young students at college, both the youngest brothers within three, and both part of high society, there are worlds between Jun and Masaki. Jun comes from a rich, traditional and conservative family,

Comments

[koi_choshi]

I'm just here to hastily comment that I'm so sorry I'm laughing at Sho's suffering. lol I know I shouldn't but Sho is just the adorable middle brother and I still don't get the rationale of whatever he was doing. Why did he try hanging off that rope ladder? What was he planning to do (I have my ideas but IDK if they're right)? But you're right, he was a comic relief, being ignored, being hit by the ugly vase, and (I'm so sorry) falling stupidly out of that rope. But I hope he'll be ok (trans: I hope Nino takes care of him).

Anyway, I'll be back tomorrow morning for a better comment.

Hello I'm back!
I noticed the differences of how Masaki's family and Jun's family fought. In Jun's family, I cannot even see the problem! They just go fighting about "it" and I don't even know what that "it" was! It's really frustrating that's nothing clear! Plus the ending was really confusing, like they did not clear it at all. Masaki's brothers on the other hand, it all ended in a good note. And a funny revelation form their brother lol.

Thanks for this chapter. TBH, I laughed in the middle of the night reading about Sho's suffering... XD

[lilly0]

OMG, I love your comment so much. Thank you for your support ♥♥
I don't know why, but somehow Sho really suits the character of a really intelligent person that suddenly has a compeletely weird idea and is a bit clumsy in real life :D I could totally imagine him standing helplessly between Jun and Takuya while they aregue.

Actually the difference in fighting was something I wanted to show from the first chapter on (I had this scene in mind pretty early tbh)