Distance Brings You Closer chapter 4

Oct 16, 2008 19:53

Title: Distance Brings You Closer (Chapter 4/?)
Author: yukinonamida
Genre: AU, Drama, Angst, Romance, Friendship
Pairing: Nishikato
Rating: R
Summary: Ryo and Shige were the best of friends until different stresses got to them and they began to grow apart. Ryo's constant verbal abuse to Shige only increases the distance between them, until they become lost in a ( Read more... )

fanfiction, nishikato

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praghufanfic October 17 2008, 03:24:41 UTC
Hahah, you already know what i think about it. I think its great!
Ryo is bipolar. LOL

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yukinonamida October 17 2008, 03:31:41 UTC
Really? I was kinda worried since I didn't have time to edit it...I really shouldn't be still online either but I am >_< lol. I had to see what you thought.

Yeah! I know X_X it seems like that huh? XD I didn't mean for that to happen >_

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praghufanfic October 17 2008, 03:34:16 UTC
O wow, i am happy that you think so highly of my opinion. PS: Thanks for the prompt the other day. It was really fun to write! I wrote another one today as well :) FIC ROLL.

I know you didn't mean for Ryo to be bipolar. Its just because of the stress of the job and not knowing how to deal with Shige, and i think you get that across quite well.

I am glad you didn't make it rape. I think now that that would have been too much.

Great job!

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yukinonamida October 17 2008, 03:37:38 UTC
I do! Your opinion is very important ;D
No problem ^^ I loved your Leah fic ;D I didn't read the other but I will tomorrow ^^

Ryo's gonna write in his journal what he was thinking during it..maybe that'll clear things up. I'm glad I get that across well ^^

Yeah..I was so worried so I kept making it clear that Shige liked it. Rape would have been scary..x_x

Thank you!

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yukinonamida October 17 2008, 03:38:21 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it ^^

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rocagel October 17 2008, 04:25:02 UTC
Oh my God. Awesomeness. Sorry I haven't replied at all yet, but I can never find the right words. Your writing is amazing!

PS: I love your icon!

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yukinonamida October 17 2008, 18:27:30 UTC
That's fine ^^ Don't worry about it :D. Thank you! <3

Thanks :D I love it too ^_^

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fairy_illusions October 17 2008, 04:36:53 UTC
What is up with Ryo? Emotional roller coaster much? lol In terms of psych, I'd say he's bipolar...crazy haha

Haha at least you warned me of the rating, but it wasn't as bad as I imagined. hehe

Yay Nishikato!~

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yukinonamida October 17 2008, 18:29:00 UTC
He has major issues XD I totally did not want to make him seem bipolar, but it seems like thats how it ended up XD

Yeah, it wasn't totally smut and it wasn't totally rape >_>; Somewhere in the middle X_X

Yay!~

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oddesy October 17 2008, 05:36:35 UTC
missed commenting on last chapter >.>

I am so in love with bitchy Ryo!!!
The story is coming along awesomely, I love all the awkwardness and angst ♥

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yukinonamida October 17 2008, 18:29:55 UTC
Haha no problem :D

Lol ^^ Thank you, I'm glad you're enjoying it <3

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