Frozen fear

[yukimahou]

RyoDa
NC-17
Summary: Based on Snow White Queen by Evanescence. Ueda can't escape.
Note: Unbeted, I AM A HORRIBLE PERSON!!! oh my god what did I even write!!! I am soo sorry Ueda. Words in italics are lyrics from the song.
WARNING: this fic contains rape... (which should not be taken lightly)

Comments

[prettyorianna]

Are the italics lines from the song you mentioned (I've never heard it, I don't know)? Because if they are, I have to say that your fic really suits them.

There's so many emotions in this. Some of them are subtle and some aren't but the overall picture is very chilling and sad. This is very well done.

[yukimahou]

thank you, and yeah the italics are some of the lyrics of the song (think I'll actually mention that in the note)

thanks for reading... sorry for the sad and chilling image... I blame the song...

[prettyorianna]

Yup, it's all the song's fault LOL (^_^) Aw, I'm just teasing you.

But I did like the story.

[yukimahou]

ahaha I can't help that lyrics get stuck in my mind, and scenarios happen and then I hear Ueda crying in my mind, and the next thing I know, I'm writing this fic...

glad you liked it

[yukimahou]

Can I hug you?　You gave hope to my own fic T.T

The song is beautiful! Amy Lee's voice is just amazing

Thanks for reading

[yukimahou]

oo thats pretty!!
I have always loved her eyes ^.^

[thesecretdoor]

Wow, I love the way you wrote this - it's really powerful!

The images you create are heartbreaking and disturbing but in all the right ways! I feel for Ueda so much T_T

I'm not familiar with the song, but the lyrics you selected fit the scenario really well :)

Thank you for sharing :D

[yukimahou]

Thank you for reading it.

It's a really beautiful yet breaking song, you should try listen to it if you can.

[effi_g]

I tried not to, but in the end I just had to read it.
There is so much power in the subtlety of your words. You didn't have to overly describe uepi's thoughts, his emotions were seeping off the page as if they have a life of their own.
The broken accepting of an abused uepi. the emptiness, the fear, the pain, the need to compose oneself and appear like everything is ok. But of all things it's in Ueda accepting his fate that really broke my heart.
You are awesome, I was a intrigued but also worried when I saw the summary of this fic. But you aren't a horrible person. The situation is horrible, but the writing is perfect.

[yukimahou]

Ahaha
I hope I didn't make you cry D: You didn't read this at work did you?
Thanks for reading it

and when I write things like this, I feel like its me abusing the character... so I feel guilty D:

[effi_g]

you do?? I suppose you are right, you do create the scenario. But you shouldn't. If you were writing from the abuser's point of view then definitely, but you are writing from the victims pov. you made the situation yeah, but your character is the one hirting not being hurt. eh I don't know, I would probably feel guilty too, but that's how I'd justify it to myself haha.

Haha don't worry, you didn't make me cry, just made my heart throb.

HAHAHA I totally read it at work ;)

[symphonic_rain]

oh my gosh!!! this was soooo good!! <3 I loved every bit of it~! Sequel?? Onegai!!!! *bows*

[yukimahou]

thank you, I'm glad you liked it

I don't know if I'll make a sequel though... I dont think I could write one...