There will be magic, chapter 12, RukaxYomi, Kaix?

[yukigafuru]

Title: There will be magic

Comments

[gemsom_feathers]

I lied... I had to delete it~ DX

[gemsom_feathers]

Oh... Oh I am a dork... XD Screened comment, my reply before that one didn't even go through! *babbling dork*

[yukigafuru]

No worries. I'm still really glad you liked it. Even though it turned out to be a spoiler. You'll just have to pretend you were hell of surprised next time. Hugs

[gemsom_feathers]

^_~ I will not fail you~
More Hugging

[keyjahn]

saw the spoiler too...
but won't say a word...

it can happen...I'm writing a story where the names are not announced till later...and how often did I had to stop myself from just typing it...

[yukigafuru]

Yeah, I can't believe I missed it even when when I checked it for errors. oh, well
Thanks for not saying a word. And enjoy!

[nobody_mirre]

ahhhh <3. now this was touching *-* making soul love there heheh ;)) plus, chappie dedicated to Kai and his mate, what more could I ask for? *grin* only one objection: they should all be real *pout*
*squishes muchly*

[yukigafuru]

Soul love? LOL I guess it works though. Oh, next chapter is dedicated to them, too. Dig in
Love you

[pudgypudding]

uwaaaah <3
aww yay! Kai found his mate :33
who is it? ne ne ne :3
i cant wait for the next one! o(^_^)o
~プディング~

[yukigafuru]

Yes, he did. And you'll find out as soon as you finish reading the next one. I figured it was bad enough torturing you with the dragon's identity to keep this a secret too.
Hugs

[fairydrop]

Awww... you really wnat to tear my heart apart, you meanie! It was a little bit simple, as they found each other but well, the situation was really bad. I woder who can it be... maybe Aoi?
And... some critic: the part with the horse coming when Kai says a command is somehow... hanging out from the story... ah how to say nicely, it doesn't really suited the text around it. (me is meanie, sorry)
Anyway, nice chapter, thank you!

[yukigafuru]

You know I always appreciate critic, because sometimes it gives me new ideas or I can explain things to my readers and broaden the fics horizons. But this time, I really have no argument. You're absolutely right. It was hanging from the story because basically it didn't belong there. I couldn't just teleport them and I suck at describing scenes like that. That's one of the things I probably need to pay more attention to. Love you