It's a Mistake... maybe.

[yukanda_lavi]

Title: It's a Mistake... maybe
Genre: Romance, thriller
Pairing: Lavi/Kanda
Rating: T (For now, rating will go up for later chapters)
Summary: Kanda is a detective in NY, but his secret dream is something else... After Lenalee plunged into his house suddenly that dream comes true. But soon after Kanda will discover that there's a price both for fame

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[yukanda_lavi]

u_u I was sure I had changed all the his/her shift that the fucking translator does (yeah, to speed up the translation process I run the text through babelfish and then I correct the shit it puts in) due to the fact that in Italian a name ending with "A" is female and one ending with "E" is male... So I always have Kanda addressed as a girl and Lenalee as a man... I say, it has sense of humor...

XD It may be I watch too much crime shows such as Law&Order... In there they always say that cops have so low retribution^^

Oh^^ I thought that "campus" and "dormitory" were the same thing, I may have to change what Kanda asks Lenalee about not being at the campus... Because, in fact, I realize now that he couldn't possibly guess just from Lenalee's presence in front of his door that something is wrong with the dorm... It makes more sense if he asks "Shouldn't you be at school?" or something along the lines. And Lenalee could answer equally that she's been thrown out, specifying "from the dorm"

In this first story (I've finished writing the sequel too XD) Komui is not living in New York. Yes, he let his precious Lenalee going alone to University and staying in a dorm! XD (Because Lenalee told him from the very beginning that she was going to stay with Kanda, I'm sure of it! XD)
In the sequel Komui obtained finally to be transferred to NY to be close to his beloved sister XD

Well, I have to translate the final part of "Don't watch me fall" but right after I will work on this one.

[yukanda_lavi]

u_u OK, it was "salary"... I was too lazy to check on the dictionary XD
It's always amusing to see how a word could mean different through the various languages. We use "retribution" as a formal way to call the salary, in English instead means "reward" O_O

I will change the "campus" sentence shortly, these days are so busy *cry*

I wanted to take Komui in from the beginning, but I couldn't come up with a role for him at the moment, so he had to wait the sequel to show up XD

The background for this AU was greatly appreciated from the Italian readers, so I wrote a sequel, and I have half plot ready for the third part... It's going to become a series XD

Well, lunch time XD