Title: Starry Sky
Author: yujira
Pairing: ReitaxRuki
Genre: Romance
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: ... Can't think of any :o
Disclaimer: Don't own anything but my imagination.
Summary: ''Look up Ru. Stars... what are they to you?'' Ruki turned his head but before answering, his lips parted slightly as he simply stared at the beauty the firmament showed with its
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This was just too sweet and cute and heartbreaking at the same time ♥
I cried even more when I read why you wrote it. I guess so, it was surely a sign, ah I hope so.
Gentle, tender, chaste, heated, soft, passionate, hungry, devouring kisses were shared.
As a single star fell from the sky.
THIS ♥ IN LOVE WITH THIS. Damn ♥
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that should make you feel better x'D *huggles*
I'm soso glad you liked, thank you sweetie.♥
I was afraid people might think I'm stupid for thinking like that since we KNOW what stars are... I'm relieved to read positive comments on that >o<
Oh I was so unsure about that part cause I kept thinking 'you're making this too easy, you should get into more details' >__<
so seeing that you loved that part makes me go all O(≧∇≦)O
YAY~ <33
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Well the credit is all for the writer dear ;) ♥
No way, I liked the whole sensitiveness there, how Reita is so romantic and all (I'd have jumped on him right there XDD) and no, sometimes it's better that way than going into explanations. That's where the real beauty is sometimes, when you don't need to describe everything plainly.
Lol my opinion isn't that important haha. Well done anyway ♥♥
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Somehow my stories always turn out with Ruki being that fragile emotional wreck and Reita, his guardian who'll always patch him up with his endless love. x'D lol *jumps him first* I feel like I'm turning him into my dreamboat.. he's just a perfect lover... to good to be true *sighs*
Ahh I think that is true :) I just still have a lot of insecurities when it comes to my writing.
And it IS to me. You inspire me and also Red Motel was one of the stories that triggered my wish to finally gain the courage to create a lj and start to write fanfiction too xD SO I gotta than you for that ;p
*pokes*
btw, I hope I'll soon get to read the new chapter of The Painter... I'm dyiiiiing waiting for it *sobsob*
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No I understand, my Aoi is often too perfect to be real XD I MEAN THE REAL ONE IS FUCKING GRUMPY XD (but I love him for that too haha).
It's normal, I have thousand of them, even if it's been months I write u__u XD
Seriously there are better writers out there than me XD But if I helped you to show you that well, you don't need to be a native to write then I'm touched ♥ You had to share your good work dear.
*pokes back*
AND I KNOW XD I'm just such a lazy/slow ass. *pats your head*
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the're a lot of great writers out there (and you're one of them for me so shush xp) but I think everyone has a bit of a different taste when it comes to 'is that story/writer good' ahh but I never judge anyone since it's not like serious business, it makes me happy and keeps me sane, that's all xD
If I could I would kick that lazy/slow ass of yours :/ and maybe lure you with some nude Aoi pics but sadly I don't own any. lol. but I really can't wait >o
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