Comments | ysabetwordsmith: Poem: "The Architects of Love"

ysabetwordsmith

Poem: "The Architects of Love"

Feb 10, 2009 20:43

This poem was prompted and sponsored by minor_architect ... and I was several verses into it before I realized that I was using the metaphor of architecture in a poem inspired by someone who has "architect" in her username!

The Architects of Love

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Comments 15

minor_architect February 11 2009, 03:12:06 UTC

I was several verses into it before I realized that I was using the metaphor of architecture in a poem inspired by someone who has "architect" in her username!

...and I only noticed this when you pointed it out! Yeesh, how clueless am I?!

Fantastic poem, though! :D

*laugh* ysabetwordsmith February 11 2009, 04:01:56 UTC

Oh dear! Well, I'm glad you like the poem.

wyrmwwd February 11 2009, 04:28:37 UTC

Very nice. This spoke to me.

Yay! ysabetwordsmith February 11 2009, 04:29:59 UTC

I'm happy that it spoke to you. This poem takes a different perspective of love than the usual.

Re: Yay! wyrmwwd February 11 2009, 04:32:40 UTC

Yes, and so do I. It was good to see someone kind of feeling that.

shadowofiris February 11 2009, 07:16:48 UTC

I like the metaphor! Neat image.

best wishes,
matt at shadowofiris.com

fayanora February 11 2009, 08:32:06 UTC

This is pretty awesome!

lizamanynames February 11 2009, 21:54:14 UTC

Oooooooooh, that's so beautiful. *sniff*