Poem: "A Walk in the Park"

Aug 10, 2014 16:46

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technoshaman August 11 2014, 00:24:25 UTC
D'awwwwww.

"I lied," Stan confessed.

Lawrence's jaw dropped.
Stan never lied.

Paybacks..... *giggles*

Of course, the paybacks that get one's companion all *goopy* are the best ones... :)

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Yay! ysabetwordsmith August 11 2014, 01:39:37 UTC
>> D'awwwwww. <<

I'm glad you enjoyed this so much.

>> Paybacks..... *giggles*

Of course, the paybacks that get one's companion all *goopy* are the best ones... :) <<

Agreed. I think that's my favorite part of the poem too. Stan is so fundamentally honest, nobody expects him to fib, so that's how he gets away with it on the extremely rare occasions he considers it necessary. And he won't lie to protect himself, but he will in cases like this where he felt the truth might have been unnecessarily harmful.

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Thank you! ysabetwordsmith August 12 2014, 08:50:14 UTC
>> Aww. These two are so utterly adorable. ^_^ <<

I'm glad you are enjoying this so much.

>> So great that things are out in the open (and that Hefty was there to support and advise <3). <<

I think Hefty's assistance plays a key role in helping both boys to identify and communicate their feelings, so they can work out what's happening between them.

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