Poetry Fishbowl Open!

Jan 07, 2014 12:25

The Poetry Fishbowl is now CLOSED.  Thank you for your time and attention.

Starting now, the Poetry Fishbowl is open!  Today's theme is "it seemed like a good idea at the time."  I will be checking this page periodically throughout the day. When people make suggestions, I'll pick some and weave them together into a poem ... and then another ... ( Read more... )

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ellenmillion January 7 2014, 18:44:36 UTC
A misadventure of Fala and her age-mates

"Helping never helps!"

Trying to prevent a minor ecological problem causes a disaster.

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Poem ysabetwordsmith January 7 2014, 23:33:45 UTC
Your prompt about helping led to the free-verse poem "Some Kind of Help." It looks at what is actually helpful and what is not.

26 lines, Buy It Now = $15

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siege January 7 2014, 18:50:12 UTC
Someone gives Ercole a soldier doll as a gift.

Measuring economies only by the volume of money in motion, rather than its overall distribution. (This might need a little research.)

The Steamsmiths' phos lanterns are ready, but now a new player produces a lantern that uses ge as fuel, and suggests a field test for comparison.

Potatoes and corn are good sources of food, but we know what happens when you grow things in a monoculture. Are there other, less visible monocultures around us today?

Brod tries to coat his sword with blacking, as one would during a night mission where shining metal is undesirable.

On Hart's Farm, some of the children try to change shape just like their friend.

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Poem ysabetwordsmith January 8 2014, 01:45:18 UTC
Your prompt about Ercole led to the free-verse poem "Soldier Boy." Sometimes toys bring up sad memories.

71 lines, Buy It Now = $35.50

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Poem ysabetwordsmith January 8 2014, 07:57:47 UTC
See below thumbnail for "Deer Children."

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Poem ysabetwordsmith January 7 2014, 19:18:21 UTC
An advance prompt from ideealisme inspired the free-verse poem "Tarnished Ideals." A coin commemorating WW1 gets a chilly reception from the populace.

30 lines, Buy It Now = $15

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Re: Poem ideealisme January 8 2014, 21:41:57 UTC
Couldn't resist and I bought it!

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Re: Poem ysabetwordsmith January 9 2014, 02:04:57 UTC

Linkback Poem ysabetwordsmith January 7 2014, 19:21:08 UTC
The linkback poem " Her Crystalline Voice" is now active.

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janetmiles January 7 2014, 19:40:31 UTC
These prompts are taken from conversations with your partner; they're not original.

Kudzu and other invasive species

"The fire-suppression sprinkler is not a bondage attachment point."

"Does anyone have access to a pair of bolt-cutters?"

These are original. Or, well, memories, not original thoughts.

"No, I didn't tell you she was dating someone else. You didn't seem to want to know."

"But everyone was asleep and I wanted to go to the playground!"

"The path is *here*, but I want to go look at that tree over *there*."

Similarly, "Oh, the freeway is under construction, I'll just take this exit and go t-- what the fuck is a roundabout doing here?!"

From the mythical _Arizona Bridge Builder's Manual_: Thou shalt build thy bridge across the FULL width of the river, for verily, Hundred-Year Flood height is a more pressing concern than thine aesthetic ideals.

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Poem ysabetwordsmith January 7 2014, 23:11:09 UTC
From your playground prompt I got the poem " The Lobster Door," today's freebie.

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Poem ysabetwordsmith January 9 2014, 21:57:30 UTC
I used several of your quotes in the free-verse poem "A Bad Day in Bed." So many things can go wrong with kink!

23 lines, Buy It Now = $10

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