Poem: "Suburban Bogeymen"

Jan 04, 2011 18:31


This poem was inspired and sponsored by aldersprig.  It's a creepy little piece about how magical creatures can adapt to modern contexts.

Suburban Bogeymen
-- a triolet

Suburbia is pretty on the surface of its streets ( Read more... )

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More triolet-y goodness! aldersprig January 5 2011, 00:42:11 UTC
oooh, neat, I love it!! Thank you! *bounce*

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I like the bogeymen-to-pushers analogy, and now I'm picturing dealers with orc tusks lurking in housing tracts...

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ever wonder about those dead-end driveways in housing tracts that never seem to get finished?

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eseme January 5 2011, 03:10:34 UTC
That is creepy, all the more so for its ring of truth.

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Yes... ysabetwordsmith January 5 2011, 03:23:32 UTC
I got to thinking about the similarity between addictive drugs and enchanted food. It seemed too obvious for the darkfey to miss the opportunity of combining the two...

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Re: Yes... eseme January 5 2011, 04:26:26 UTC
*nods*

So true!

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Yes... ysabetwordsmith January 9 2011, 07:31:11 UTC
Sometimes the truth is scarier than fiction, and people don't like to look at it.

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fayanora January 5 2011, 05:53:13 UTC
Before the mention of "pushers," I was getting a "bogeymen pretend to be child molesters" vibe.

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0_o ysabetwordsmith January 5 2011, 05:56:44 UTC
That is a whole nother flavor of creepy.

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Re: 0_o fayanora January 5 2011, 05:57:46 UTC
Well it kinda makes sense. If bogeymen eat children, they'd probably lure them in the way serial child molesters do.

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Re: 0_o ysabetwordsmith January 5 2011, 06:07:51 UTC
That's one way to do it, yeah.

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