Poem: "The Wheel of Light"

[ysabetwordsmith]

This poem came out of the June 1, 2010 Poetry Fishbowl.  It was inspired by a prompt from wyld_dandelyon.  It was sponsored out of the general donation fund, selected by the audience in a recent poll.

The Wheel of Light

The color wheel whirls,
spinning the light into spokes.
Each color has its own place,
bowing to its partner across the ring.

Red is the rose

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[dhyvd]

I like this one!

It's so... well,,, poetic :)

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[ysabetwordsmith]

Yay! I'm happy to hear that.

[filkferengi]

Lovely imagery, especially the trailing sleeves!

Thank you!

[ysabetwordsmith]

I enjoy pairing the concrete with the abstract, and coming up with vivid whimsical images.