Poem: "cutting and folding"

Apr 07, 2010 11:26


This poem came out of the April 6, 2010 Poetry Fishbowl.  It was inspired and sponsored by marina_bonomi.  It also features the same protagonist as in the March fishbowl poem " folded wings."  The two morals at the end are poetic paraphrases of Buddhist sayings.

cutting and folding

kirigami mage
watches her gentle rival
and shreds green paper

origami mage ( Read more... )

poem, fantasy, reading, writing, fishbowl, poetry, cyberfunded creativity

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marina_bonomi April 7 2010, 16:29:38 UTC
Thank you.

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You're welcome! ysabetwordsmith April 7 2010, 16:50:21 UTC
I'm glad this one got sponsored, since several folks wanted to see more of the origami mage.

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Re: You're welcome! marina_bonomi April 7 2010, 17:36:46 UTC
I hope you'll feel like writing more poems about her, I'll definitely sponsor them.

I'm addicted to origami, I figure it shows. ;-)
I was thinking of submitting her as a prompt for the next sketch fest, would you agree?

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Re: You're welcome! ysabetwordsmith April 7 2010, 20:26:55 UTC
>>I hope you'll feel like writing more poems about her, I'll definitely sponsor them.<<

I'm willing to keep exploring a popular character. She is fun.

>> I'm addicted to origami, I figure it shows. <<

I like origami too, although my skill at it is minimal. My partner is considerably better.

>> I was thinking of submitting her as a prompt for the next sketch fest, would you agree? <<

Go for it! It would be fun to see an idea travel from one crowdfunded project to another.

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jenny_evergreen April 7 2010, 18:34:59 UTC
Excellent! I'm glad someone else thought to bring her up again since I loved her so much last time! :)

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Yay! ysabetwordsmith April 7 2010, 20:40:08 UTC
I think she's developing a following.

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tuftears April 7 2010, 19:05:27 UTC
This so begs for illustration by someone who does serene art. ^_^ Stephanie Pui-Mun Law maybe!

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Ooo... ysabetwordsmith April 7 2010, 20:19:39 UTC
Pretty art!

Feel free to show the poem to any artist you think might enjoy illustrating it.

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