Seventh Verse, Same as the First

[yourpalkara]

Title: Seventh Verse, Same as the First
Pairing/characters: Sam/Dean
Rating: R
Warnings: Alcoholism
Spoilers: Vague spoilers for up to about 7x07
Word count: 421
Summary: Little bit louder and a little bit worse
Notes: I…I don’t know???????

Comments

[auntilz]

askjdlksajd that was absolutely stunning! "Someone says you two are cute together and the man thinks there are more than two of us." was definitely my favorite line. thank you for sharing!

[yourpalkara]

thank you so much!! :D

[biketest]

This was beautiful and perfect. I can't believe you did all that in a little over 400 words. Amazing job, wow.

[yourpalkara]

thank you!!!

[tabaqui]

He says he (thank you, Sam, I love it) loves you when you buy him a six pack. And you say you’re welcome in the dark. Strip him and hold his hips down. But you make him do all the work and he (I can’t do this alone.)

I absolutely love bits and pieces of their life growing up, episodes we've seen bleeding into what's going on in the here and now of them.

Love the jerky, disjointed style, minds that are trapped in loops and the past and can't ever really get clear.
Oh, boys.

Excellent stuff.

[yourpalkara]

thanks very much! i appreciate it.

[roxymissrose]

I just read this and glanced at the word count after and went 'holy shit--that was only 400 some words?' I see another commenter was also amazed at how much you said and how beautifully in under 500 words. Damn, just--wow.

[yourpalkara]

thank you very much! i'm always impressed when under 1000 words fics manage to, like, express a complete idea and be well-written because i'v read so many that haven't done that entirely successfully. but i thought i'd give it a try (twice, apparently) and i'm glad it worked for you.

[trekkiepirate]

This is a truly stunning and powerful story. I love how you took the dialogue from the show and twined it with your own words. Excellently done!

[yourpalkara]

thank you!!