020. all the little details.

[lotus]

title: all the little details
pairing: ninomiya kazunari/sakurai sho
rating: pg-13, i think. as far as language goes, this is one of my more mild fics.
word count: 6,965
disclaimer: this is purely a work of fiction. i don't own! i just play with them
author note: this is a big thing for me. not only is it a long sakumiya piece, it's also A/U! so

Comments

[narusaku4vr]

AWWWW!!! I bhave to admit Nino's tactics were stalkerish but then we would like to find out anything about he person we like right?!?

This was wonderful, thanks for sharing.

[lotus]

they definitely were stalkerish! i was hoping i could make him creepy but still cute enough that sho would like him anyway hahah thank you for reading! ^_^

[nino4ever]

Ahhh, haha, I like the ending, those two are pervert, haha. This fic is cute ^^
Thanks for your writing (hihi, I'm writing Sakumiya too, it's "Waiting for you", hope you can read it XD)

[lotus]

hahah thank you for reading, i'm glad you liked it! i will do that :)

[blufox_o7]

OHMYGOD, YOU!

First of all, I'm really amazed at how good you can write dialogues. I think it's something most people struggle writing. I've read too many w/ awkward dialogues-- lines with insanely out of character tones. But yours is just.. ♥ I don't even know how to describe it. It's simple an natural-- not too pushy or stupid. And you were able to grasp their tone somehow. For that, yeay you! ♥

I also love how this is SakuMiya because if there are two things I love-- it's OhMiya and SakuMiya. (Hallow, Nino freak alert!)

But yeah. About this, I love how you developed the story. It's neither slow nor rushed. It just seems like a path was created at the same pace the characters are walking. Do you get what I'm saying? I know I'm rambling, but I hope you understand what it is I'm trying to point out. If not just-- UGH. Really, if not, just take my love for you because really, I love this piece a lot

[lotus]

ah i am really happy to hear this because i'm always so weird about writing dialogue! there are so many times where i think i'm writing too much of it or that it sounds strange or something hahah :( but i'm honestly really glad right now.

and no worries, i totally get what you're saying :) thank you so much for reading and for this amazing comment aghalkgh ahhh i'm so glad you loved it so much!

[nicefinalbeam]

WHY ARE YOU SO AWESOME!? Seriously. The stuff you write turns me into a puddle of goop. In the best way, of course. ♥

Nino's method of getting to know Sho really kind of... hit close to home with me because my first boyfriend had a similar way of handling things. I've always found it charming. :D

I like that Sho is nervous and messes it up at first. I really don't blame him. I'm glad Nino gave him another chance (though really, why wouldn't he? It's a win-win this way! :p)

:D Loved it!

[lotus]

WEEEE i don't really think i am but i'm glad that it turns you into a good puddle of goop *scoops you up*

ah i love it, i think i would completely charmed if i were approached like this- i thought he would seem creepy but nino is sort-of a little bit of a creep anyway, it's just that he's cute enough that it works for him.

i'm glad you loved it ^_^ thank you for reading it!! <3

[chibipinkpetals]

oh this was just so lovely and just awesome. oh Nino and his 'subtleness'. just awesome. your dialogue was just amazingly beautiful. including the others just right without forcing them into it. loved it. thnx 4 sharing. XDD

[lotus]

i wanted to find a way to put them in somehow, it didn't feel right without them hahah ^_^ thank you so much for reading and for commenting! <3