Sylar- The Demon Watchmaker Of Queens (4/4)

[youngsaavik]

 Even with the story provided by Sylar, Micah thought it would be harder to enter the Haitian´s asylum, but the man seemed to be used to visits of apprentices he had never seem.

“We have a very important client” the boy had told him “who needs it with a certain urgency. So, I know it´s late, but could I please take a look at the girls?”

“Of course

Comments

[furius]

YOU FIXED THE ENDING. THANK GOODNESS.

*is so relieved*

[youngsaavik]

I tried to keep it, but I couldn´t! I´m unable to be (too) cruel to Sy. Besides, I had everything I needed for a happy ending- Sylar´s miraculous blood to bring Mo back to life, Mo´s blood to cure his own insanity and even Toby´s "ladies and gentleman, you´re about to see something that would raise up the deeeead"! I don´t think I ever loved Sondheim more than when I realized how I could use that line. XD

[teecub]

Oooo! This was really a fun read! Poor Sylar - and everyone else - suffering throughout all of this, all the while thinking Mohinder was gone. Then the end - whoa! I love it! Poor Lyle, though! <3

[youngsaavik]

Thanks, I´m glad you liked it. =) And yes, poor Lyle... Unfortunaly, to give him any other end would be to make the entire Heroesverse OOC. XD

[levitatethis]

A much happier ending...Thank you!

Well, except for poor Lyle who no one pays any attention to :-) So glad that Sylar and Mohinder had their reunion.

[youngsaavik]

You´re welcome. =)

The sad thing is that the Bennets were completely in character. Poor Lyle... He´s funny messing with, but I don´t think I´ll write him again for a long time. There´s simply no giving him a different end than that. =)

[poemwithnorhyme]

You did change the ending then! Oh, I like this better..and poor friggin' Lyle! Seriously now, that poor boy! I feel so bad for him, it's crazy....So, great ending for a wonderful story. *loves yous*

One more nitpick from me though:
“I´ll found a carriage, my love...." <---Shouldn't it be 'find'?

Anyways, I really enjoyed this, wonderful!

[youngsaavik]

*Corrects*

I´m so glad you liked it! An omg, everybody commented Lyle... Was I too harsh with him? =/

Thanks so much for reading!