소녀, 사랑을 찾아봐 [haesica, hyohyuk, hyosica, R]
Title: 소녀, 사랑을 찾아봐
Pairing: HaeSica, HyoHyuk, HyoSica
Rating: R
Summary: Jessica tries to find love and gets lost in the process. (Sort of AU follow-up to 소녀, 사랑을 만나다Note: I wrote this for my creative writing class, again. I wanted to write something about a girl lost in love, and I was particularly interested in doing it about a Korean girl ( Read more... )
Pairing: HaeSica, HyoHyuk, HyoSica
Rating: R
Summary: Jessica tries to find love and gets lost in the process. (Sort of AU follow-up to 소녀, 사랑을 만나다Note: I wrote this for my creative writing class, again. I wanted to write something about a girl lost in love, and I was particularly interested in doing it about a Korean girl ( Read more... )
"..as he sloppily stick[s] his tongue in her mouth.."
"She holds his hand as the[y] walk back.."
"'You’ll find a good Korea[n] boy..'"
"Jessica let[s] herself eat food.."
"..has been going to school in the s[S]tates.."
"She’s sick a[nd] tired of being Sooyeon."
"..so she stays on in the dorm.."
"..reading magazine[s] and rereading books.."
"..and she goes to eat [at] the Korean restaurant.."
"Her minds keeps going back.."
"..when Jessica realizes what she’s doing and [she] pulls back her palms.."
"..Jessica falls into [them] and cries."
--(square brackets [...] for what could be added, and strikes for what could be omitted)
by no means do I mean to offend you in any way, just thought I could point out a few things --I think your writing is wonderful and I love the detail-oriented-ness(?) ...HyoSica! :D
-> && sorry 'bout it being all jumbled up and not very clear, I didn't mean for it to come out this long ><
-!
Reply
Reply
Leave a comment