[fic] the complete guide to insufficiency
So fluffyfrolicker is hosting the mortals shall bow; a multi fandom women comment ficathon and I AM BASICALLY MAKING EVERYONE WRITE ME RAVEN/BELLAMY FIC AS THEY SHOULD. And clearly I am surrounded by people I do not deserve, because they've actually done it to. PLZ READ ASAP.
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Of course they're inevitably growing closer -- because this kind of sex does bring people closer, whether they like it or not. There is complete lack of knowledge, then a little knowledge. There is Bellamy's sudden, irrational desire to satisfy her (NOW I WANT A SEPARATE FIC ABOUT BELLAMY'S ATTITUDE TO RAVEN'S ORGASMS).
My favorite thing is how he silently develops a need of Raven. It's something that doesn't even show in narration, but it progresses until he finds himself in her tent. He doesn't think about it, doesn't self-reflect, he just needs, and impulsively acts on the need.
In other news, come over on Wednesday, I'll be ritually burning your fics at a stake.
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I feel like Bellamy's "sorry" right after their sex scene, is pretty much testament to the "bringing closer" part of it. It's an inevtiability to allowing yourself to be vulnerable? Especially since she contextualized it through Finn/Clarke instead of just demanding it. (Although I feel like it was because she couldn't hold it in and not necessarily because she wanted him to know.)
WHY DON'T YOU WRITE ME FIC ABOUT BELLAMY'S ATTITUDE TO RAVEN'S ORGASMS. The guy's a whore, it has to be killing him, you know it.
Impulsive is kind of my understanding of Bellamy; sometimes he's the one who thinks it out, but often he goes by gut feeling (which, then it's immaterial, that it may turn out to be right) and sometimes by caution. He's a mess of contradictions too (like Raven <3), which makes him so interesting!
COME WEDNESDAY, IF RAVEN DIES, I'M BURNING MYSELF AT A STAKE OKAY.
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Especially since she contextualized it through Finn/Clarke instead of just demanding it. (Although I feel like it was because she couldn't hold it in and not necessarily because she wanted him to know.)
Definitely, she didn't mean him to know. And of course she misread him -- she expected him not to care even if he noticed. BECAUSE SHE'S COUNTING ON HIS STEREOTYPE.
WHY DON'T YOU WRITE ME FIC ABOUT BELLAMY'S ATTITUDE TO RAVEN'S ORGASMS. The guy's a whore, it has to be killing him, you know it.
OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGG. Because it's important to his ~persona that she comes, and at some point, it becomes important to him as well (he just wants to give), but he can't exactly drop down to his knees and eat her out, because HE'S NOT HER LOVER. I'M DYING NOW. FUCK.
I'm working on an exchange fic due this weekend, you evil fiend from hell! DO NOT TEMPT. GO WRITE.
(I want to write it.)
RAVEN WILL NOT DIE. I REFUSE.
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Definitely, she didn't mean him to know. And of course she misread him -- she expected him not to care even if he noticed. BECAUSE SHE'S COUNTING ON HIS STEREOTYPE.
AND WE ALL KNOW HOW THAT WORKED OUT. His expression at the end though, when she got up immediately, I cannot.
Because it's important to his ~persona that she comes, and at some point, it becomes important to him as well (he just wants to give), but he can't exactly drop down to his knees and eat her out, because HE'S NOT HER LOVER. I'M DYING NOW. FUCK.WHY ARE YOU MAKING ME DIE ALONGSIDE YOU. But people becoming their persona/losing touch in the persona-person dynamic? HARDCORE KINK. Now that you have ruined my life, you must make up for it and write me this fic. omg, "not her lover" killed me, because of course he's not? WHAT ARE YOU EVEN TRYING TO DO TO ME, YOU HORRIBLE PERSON ( ... )
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His expression at the end though, when she got up immediately, I cannot.
I will never can again, and you did this to me :(.
Now that you have ruined my life, you must make up for it and write me this fic.
I'll make you a deal. If you give me advice on the fic I'm writing for the exchange (you don't even need to know the fandom, I just want some advice on the graphic aspect of the story), I'm announcing that I've done a reasonable amount of work for one night, and dropping it to write you porn :P.
And of course he's not her lover. "Lover" is too tender a word.
I MIGHT BE HORRIBLE, BUT YOU'RE WORSE.
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I will never can again, and you did this to me :(.
LBR, the show wants us to ship this. For once, I'm just doing what I'm told /nods.
I'll make you a deal. If you give me advice on the fic I'm writing for the exchange (you don't even need to know the fandom, I just want some advice on the graphic aspect of the story), I'm announcing that I've done a reasonable amount of work for one night, and dropping it to write you porn :P.
Hee, my advice is yours forever ofc (I'm a terrible adviser, js). It's 2:00 a.m. here though, don't know how effective I'll be. BUT ANYTHING FOR FIC OFC. By graphic aspect you mean like nc-17 stuff or...actual graphics?!
And it wasn't even about him for him to qualify as "lover". THIS SHIP THO.
Hahaha, LOVE how most of our time is spent trying to figure out who is the worst.
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but he can't exactly drop down to his knees and eat her out, because HE'S NOT HER LOVER
I HATE BOTH OF YOU. I'VE ONLY SEEN THREE EPISODES AND THERE'S FIC AND SENTENCES FORMING IN MY HEAD RIGHT NOW.
I HATE YOU.
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I HATE BOTH OF YOU. I'VE ONLY SEEN THREE EPISODES AND THERE'S FIC AND SENTENCES FORMING IN MY HEAD RIGHT NOW.
L M A O, I'M PRETTY SURE THEY HAVEN'T EVEN MET?? Although their first meeting is one of my favorite things forever. BUT YES, PLZ SHIP OUR FANDOM NON-SHIP AND WRITE FIC OKAY.
THE HATRED IS MUTUAL.
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I think I'm actually sort of taking your and Marta's conversations as canon and this show is just like someone wrote fic afterwards. #crazy
MUTUAL HATRED IS THE BEST KIND.
LET US ALL DO OUR WORST, ALWAYS.
LIKE THIS AWFUL FIC, SERIOUSLY.
Bellamy/Orgasms/Raven ♥
BUT SERIOUSLY, THOUGH. LOVElY FIC.
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DUDE, I wish mine and Marta's conversations were canon. I would totally devote my life to that version of the show!! Also, the show is very campy bcz CW so it works thinking of it as fic ofc.
YES PLZ SHIP MY SHIP AND BE THE WORST AND WRITE ME FIC.
I AM GLAD YOU THINK THE FIC IS AWFUL, MY WORK IS DONE.
Bellamy/Orgasms/Raven ♥
OT3 TO END ALL OT3. I WANT THIS STAT. YESTERDAY. 200 YEARS AGO.
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DUDE, I wish mine and Marta's conversations were canon.
SOMETIMES I WISH IT TOO.
YES PLZ SHIP MY SHIP AND BE THE WORST AND WRITE ME FIC.
I PLAN TO.
♥
HOW IS YOUR LIFE? :O
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OMG, THE PROSPECT OF FIC FOR MY OTP. D Y I N G.
My life is terrible, I-- although nobody would guess it-- have exams, and instead I'm super enabled about a CW show. Like.
I HOPE YOU'RE DOING BETTER.
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Oh, you romantic, you ♥
OMG, THE PROSPECT OF FIC FOR MY OTP. D Y I N G.
I have half a paragraph about Bellamy somewhere that I wrote during the first half of the first episode.
THE BOY WHO STARTS A PSEUDO ANARCHY NOT BECAUSE HE IS THIS AWESOME MACHO BOY, NO, HE IS JUST SCARED. ISN'T IT BEAUTIFUL?
I AM DOING, WELL, I DO NOT KNOW.
I have exams, which I'm sort of studying for, and also, there's tons of fic to be written and read and people to be enabled. Fandom's so glorious occasionally ♥
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u know me.
I have half a paragraph about Bellamy somewhere that I wrote during the first half of the first episode.
HAHAHAHAHA, always enabled by pretty boys being all "kthxbye" about gendered norms. AND HE REALLY IS SCARED. And channeling that into his image? Becoming the de facto leader while denouncing leadership? GIVE ME ALL OF IT.
NOBODY TRULY KNOWS HOW THEY'RE DOING, 'TIS TRUE.
I love how the exams just...make everything else just ridiculously interesting. I write most of my longest fics during exams and have long, dry periods after they're done. Best of luck <3 AND YES TO FIC READING/WRITING.
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HAHAHAHAHA, always enabled by pretty boys being all "kthxbye" about gendered norms. AND HE REALLY IS SCARED. And channeling that into his image? Becoming the de facto leader while denouncing leadership? GIVE ME ALL OF IT.
IT IS ALL BEAUTIFUL. HE WANTS TO BE THE LEADER OF A GROUP OF PEOPLE HE WANTS TO CONVINCE THAT THEY DON'T NEED LEADERSHIP. AND WHILE HE SORT OF FAILS AT THE LEADERSHIP HE'S PRETENDING NOT TO BE DOING, HE ALSO ACTUALLY BECOMES THEIR LEADER? because he teaches Charlotte how to fight her fear and tries to make all the right choices, and he's a king, you know. He'll make choices for his people and he'll always want to protect them dearly. THE SCENE WITH HIM SITTING BY CLARKE AS SHE KILLS ATOM, IT WAS BEAUTIFUL. AND CLARKE, TOO. SHE SANG TO HIM. GORGEOUS.
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