(Fic) Undercover Love - 8

[redmist_23]

Title: Undercover Love
Length: Chaptered, 8/12
Characters: DBSK and Suju boys
Pairings: Jaeho, Yoosu and some others
Genre: Mystery, Romance
Rating: PG-13 (language)
Summary: Park Yoochun went undercover to protect an important witness.
Disclaimer: Pure fiction. Any relation to any real and living person is pure coincidence.
Author’s note: Inspired

Comments

[tumi18]

wow... junsu's that good?? poor yoochun! you better start thinking of ways to impress junsu ^^

i think all of them are agents.. well except for jaejoong XD...

[redmist_23]

Wow, you are fast, I just posted.

Hmph.. think of ways to impress Junsu? like?

[tumi18]

im stalking communities cos im bored XD

hmmmm... like errr.. playing the piano?? (haha very original) i dont know.. lol if he want to be the dominant one he better start something now ^^

[redmist_23]

Actually that is true. I read somewhere that Junsu's hobbies is playing the piano. He seems to have won some piano competition before. Just that they don't show him playing the piano that often.

I know he knows Taekwondo too - he's a 2nd Dan if i remember correctly. (not sure now)

[ladypurr]

Now I'm beginning to suspect that Junsu is an agent...and maybe planted there because of his ties to those people in that area. Hmmmm.....*ponderponder* I like how this fic makes me think. I think there needs to be some wining and dining on Chun's part, maybe showing some of that suave romantic charmer skill.

[redmist_23]

I like a little twists in my stories, just to make you think. Don't just stick to the sterotypes.

So is Su the seme or uke now? Chunnie have to think again. LOL

Thanks for the ideas, maybe later.

[fuu_luv_tofu]

*sigh* do I even have the right to say my spot??

I promise I will leave you a better comment tomorrow X(

[fuu_luv_tofu]

done reading!!!! yah...but I'm much of a slow reader >.>

I agree with tumi18 *points up* maybe all of them are agent except Jaejoong~~ Yunho, Changmin, and Junsu seems to have all the possibility of being agents~~ all top taekwondo after all~~ besides...Junsu's comment interests me...having a few secrets?? Yoochun is probably not the only one~

oh...so Junsu is a rich boy then why does he needs to be agent?? maybe he's not an agent?? I'm confuse ><
your fic make me think too much...I think one day my brain will learn to train double hard to think because of you >.<

I still say Junsu as seme~~ because now Junsu proves to be stronger then Yoochun I'll say its hotter for him to be on top~!!!! or is that just me? XP

I will wait for your next update!!!!
as I will have to be more earlier next time >_<

see you then and there on your next post~!!!!!

^_~

p.s. sorry for commenting so late one more time...it took me a long time to read and to comment...plus finals studies is killing me >.>

[redmist_23]

It's ok. better late than never and your comments are always constructive.

Seme Su. (I like too) LOL.

[undine_vampira]

*whines* i've been retyping my comment like 5 times! gah!!!
hating LJ at the moment... *pout*

on to the real comment..
Ah~~~ that was a very cute chapter... hahah! so, su is not that weak after all, huh? heheh.. Yoochun better watch his ass.. will there be a proper Yoosu date without that stupid Eunhyuk? and the JAeho is sweet... ^_^

update soon! *waiting eagerly*

[redmist_23]

yeah, totally understand. LJ can be a pain at times.

proper yoosu date? not this part, next one possible, even smut. Still thinking about it esp the seme/uke issue. haha.

[enkhgerel]

LoL, i love Yoochun's present, it's so funny and so true. Hmm, who are the secret agents? I think, Eunhyuk is one of them, of cource Yunho is one. i think everyone can be agents, but how can they be a close friends so fast? Like Changmin, if you look closely, he would be a secret agent that does the brain work or the one that researches, but Junsu and Changmin are close friends. so that's where it confuses me. Unless, it's all part of the under cover plan. wow, i wrote alot. Well that's what i think.
P.S. i love strong Junsu.