how to get stuck alone on halloween eve
you decide you have beetter things to do.. until it is two hours before 10 pm and people starts calling you about parties. then you realize its too late, why didn;t you pick up your dress?? there is always tomorrow
you wake up at 3 am, what a nightmare.. and that loud neighbor yapping about god knnows what next door. soft music calms you down.
then your drama/poetry teacher comes to mind " I've eaten three of this cookies already.. I am clearly depressed"
you smile and curse at the bagel you ate.
try to make your nightmare into your treatment for broadcast writing: it could have worked if it had more dialogue in it.. not
A woman/girl (possibly me) is talking to this headless blob,he has a muffled voice,the body of what looks something like seal, black, hairy, living in a dark room. This girl talking to him.. she is not afraid.She is nice to him for some reason.
Now I am the woman, and I am meeting with friends, except that they had dinner without me. its late and I decide to go home instead of staying. Then I get a call from my other friends, 'Maria Jose' among the which is kind of weird (I haven;t seen or spoken to her in a long time). A friend of hers forgot to tell me something and I decide not to meet with them, except they come home and this people I barely talked to in highschool come with them.. the house has a big garden. and they go aoutside to play sports together (I don;t join them but I watch) in a group and leave their kids inside playing (which in my dream is a bad thing.. speacially since kids= annoying disgrace) and this two girls get into the kitchen and start running and playing near the stove. and I get in there with a bad feeling, oh, they broke my favorite flower pot with my glass roses. I let their parents know and the girls hate me.
so the the woman detaches from me. she is unpredictable.. what is she doing? she is taking the broken flowerpot with her, goes into a dirty metro. she feels scared and upset- looks kind of rigid as she hugs her flowerpot in a bag.
she walks down dirty paths until she gets to a filthy hole, long tube-like hole. maybe a sewer? An this headless thing aproaches from far away, filthy as ever crawling slowly with its fins, calling "sister" and she does not feel releif when she sees him.. she just feels scared, desperate, as in not knowing what to do, where to turn. "sister, what did you bring" (almost like he could repair it)
suddlenly a wall opens, the other end of a tube,the sewer. those kids had followed her, along withh their parents.. who were strangers. they looked disgusted, angry,at the other end.
there is an image of a small blond girl, she is the woman from before. eating a lolipop and her brother is next to her.. he is a beautiful boy, he is black. and then there is a feeling that an accident is about to happen, his brother will loose his head, he will die.
you wake up at 3 am, what a nightmare.. and that loud neighbor yapping about god knnows what next door. soft music calms you down.
then your drama/poetry teacher comes to mind " I've eaten three of this cookies already.. I am clearly depressed"
you smile and curse at the bagel you ate.
try to make your nightmare into your treatment for broadcast writing: it could have worked if it had more dialogue in it.. not
A woman/girl (possibly me) is talking to this headless blob,he has a muffled voice,the body of what looks something like seal, black, hairy, living in a dark room. This girl talking to him.. she is not afraid.She is nice to him for some reason.
Now I am the woman, and I am meeting with friends, except that they had dinner without me. its late and I decide to go home instead of staying. Then I get a call from my other friends, 'Maria Jose' among the which is kind of weird (I haven;t seen or spoken to her in a long time). A friend of hers forgot to tell me something and I decide not to meet with them, except they come home and this people I barely talked to in highschool come with them.. the house has a big garden. and they go aoutside to play sports together (I don;t join them but I watch) in a group and leave their kids inside playing (which in my dream is a bad thing.. speacially since kids= annoying disgrace) and this two girls get into the kitchen and start running and playing near the stove. and I get in there with a bad feeling, oh, they broke my favorite flower pot with my glass roses. I let their parents know and the girls hate me.
so the the woman detaches from me. she is unpredictable.. what is she doing? she is taking the broken flowerpot with her, goes into a dirty metro. she feels scared and upset- looks kind of rigid as she hugs her flowerpot in a bag.
she walks down dirty paths until she gets to a filthy hole, long tube-like hole. maybe a sewer? An this headless thing aproaches from far away, filthy as ever crawling slowly with its fins, calling "sister" and she does not feel releif when she sees him.. she just feels scared, desperate, as in not knowing what to do, where to turn. "sister, what did you bring" (almost like he could repair it)
suddlenly a wall opens, the other end of a tube,the sewer. those kids had followed her, along withh their parents.. who were strangers. they looked disgusted, angry,at the other end.
there is an image of a small blond girl, she is the woman from before. eating a lolipop and her brother is next to her.. he is a beautiful boy, he is black. and then there is a feeling that an accident is about to happen, his brother will loose his head, he will die.