fic: having trouble telling how i feel

[ymorton]

fic: having trouble telling how i feel
fandom: the social network rpf
pairing: jesse/andrew (i feel ashamed a little bit)
notes: first RPF ever written. i blame these boys. and the fandom's collective tin hat. :D 
title is from lykke li's dance dance dance
oh and vaguely written for the exquisite tsn_kinkmeme prompt: "I'd love something about how much

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[teapirate]

okay i am feeling way too flail-y over this and probably shouldn't be trusted with a keyboard at this late hour and with all these gushing andrew/jesse feelings but i am going to try to give you a worthy, semi-coherent comment because THIS REALLY REALLY DESERVES IT, OKAY

"All you have to do is ask, love."

"Andrew, please let me come," Jesse says, choking on it, because it's not something people like him say. It sounds pornographic, unabashedly sexual, and Jesse blushes hot even as Andrew lowers his head and sucks in earnest.

nnnggggghhhh. Fuck Aaron Sorkin, THIS RIGHT HERE should be winning awards. seriously, so hot and so them.

"You're gorgeous, Jesse," he says quietly, intimately, and Jesse breathes and tries to let himself accept it. He's been telling himself since he was thirteen years old that he doesn't deserve anything people give him, but when Andrew says it he wants to learn how.

MEH and then it somehow went very quickly from very hot to extremely sad. poor jesse. :'( but your andrew was completely perfect and their dynamic was perfect and that perfection will make him all better. :)

and then the last line was just more perfect heaped upon the giant fic-plate of perfect.

/long rambling comment makes no sense. I apologize. basically i just really loved it, the end.

[ymorton]

AH, I LOVE FLAILY COMMENTS. I HAVE ALWAYS WANTED ONE OF MY VERY OWNNNNN

thank you so much!! i am really really happy you loved it. i was extremely flaily myself about your post- golden globes celebratory sufjan stevens-titled fic of awesomeness, so i am flattered!!! :)

[teapirate]

OH HONEY I COULD GIVE YOU SO MANY MORE

you are so extremely welcome!! i was completely in love with that prompt from the minute i saw it and dying for someone to fill it AND YOU COMPLETELY SURPASSED ALL EXPECTATIONS NNGGH IT WAS PERFECT.
and thank you so much, i really appreciate that :)