OMG!!! DArling!! This is beautiful beyond words! There are so many parts I loved and your description is heartbreaking! <333
those brown perky freckles calling out to me, moving slightly with each muscle of your cheeks. Loved this image! Awws!
Sometimes making jokes, being sarcastic…is the only way to heal. - So Sawyer...this is exactly the way he heals!
That no matter how tough I may act, even the faintest sight of Kate can send me right back to that feeling of torture. - I just want to hug him!!! <333
That was my name, but only to her. I wasn't Sawyer around her, I was a bare naked soul. Gaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh!! I friggin adore this! ^_^
My eyes start becoming blurry. I blink furiously, attempting to combat any tears. - Awwss this is exactly what he did!!
Whaaaaaaaa-aaaaat? you are so much better at this than me!! I mean seriously... compared to you my use of the language and all of those wonderful descriptions is so childlike!! I mean duuuh...your writing is beautiful!! :) Hehe, yeah but still "Freckles" is so adorable! And so Sawyer! ^^ His macho side is just a facade, we all know how sensitive he really is! =P XD
OMG you did it more than justice it was a delightful, memorable piece!!
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DArling!!
This is beautiful beyond words!
There are so many parts I loved and your description is heartbreaking! <333
those brown perky freckles calling out to me, moving slightly with each muscle of your cheeks. Loved this image! Awws!
Sometimes making jokes, being sarcastic…is the only way to heal. - So Sawyer...this is exactly the way he heals!
That no matter how tough I may act, even the faintest sight of Kate can send me right back to that feeling of torture. - I just want to hug him!!! <333
That was my name, but only to her. I wasn't Sawyer around her, I was a bare naked soul. Gaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh!! I friggin adore this! ^_^
My eyes start becoming blurry. I blink furiously, attempting to combat any tears. - Awwss this is exactly what he did!!
I adored thgis thanks for the dedication baby!
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But writing descriptions is my favourite, I am no good at plot!
Haha I had to mention her freckles! although he calls her Kate now!
Hehe yes I wanted to show his tough, macho side contrasting with a sensitive side :)
Watching Sawyer blinking - that inspired that line and it broke my heart so I hope I did it justice!!
Will certainly write more!
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you are so much better at this than me!!
I mean seriously... compared to you my use of the language and all of those wonderful descriptions is so childlike!!
I mean duuuh...your writing is beautiful!! :)
Hehe, yeah but still "Freckles" is so adorable! And so Sawyer! ^^
His macho side is just a facade, we all know how sensitive he really is! =P XD
OMG you did it more than justice it was a delightful, memorable piece!!
YAY!
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I love this couple so much so I really feel proud when I have written a fic that shows how I feel about them!!
Thank you!!
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I find sad fics so much more interesting to write than happy ones, LOL.
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