Prompt Post - Part Seven [CLOSED TO NEW PROMPTS]

Oct 02, 2011 22:34



THIS PART IS NOW CLOSED. YOU CAN CONTINUE POSTING FILLS, BUT PLEASE PROMPT ALL NEW THINGS HERE.

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Re: Fill: The Flying Grayson 5b/? anonymous October 27 2011, 20:24:43 UTC
This story is progressing extremely well. Highlighting the differences between Robin and Dick is the real stand-out point, in my opinion.

I adore the Artemis point of view. Artemis/Dick friendship is my latest favorite thing to see in stories, though Babs and Wally are still fighting for number one to be paired with Dick in my books. I'd like to see the Artemis and Dick/Robin interaction kept up. Artemis is smarter than most people give her credit for, and being raised by a supervillain would make her more observant than everyone else except Robin.

I do think you've downplayed Wally and Robin's interaction, though. Wally can be quite observant when it comes to Robin, and we're not really seeing that here. Plenty of Wally and Dick interaction, but too little of Wally and Robin, when Robin is Wally's best friend, and he doesn't know who Dick is.

Other than that, Dick riding Superboy's shoulder was sooooooo cute! I nearly squealed! And the pacing of the story is excellent.

Keep it up! Can't wait for more. Did I mention I love the quick updates? Because I love the quick updates.

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Re: Fill: The Flying Grayson 5b/? mishagirl October 27 2011, 20:37:21 UTC
Oo! I forgot to mention I loved Superboy's jungle gymness with Dick too...I almost felt like Robin was jealous of even this, that easy, open way with people he still has but used to have in much more sparkling abundance.

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