DAY FIVE ★ colour hassles

Nov 10, 2015 20:50

Username: nereid_nymph
Prompt #: 114 [prompt details]Prince!au. Prince Yifan is having a banquet and servant Joonmyun's friends dare him to crossdress as a girl for the heck of it. On the night of the banquet, Joonmyun, as a girl, catches the eye of Prince Yifan, who instantly falls in love with girl!Joonmyun. Joonmyun freaks out and leaves at midnight. The next day, Prince Read more... )

*fanfiction, day 05, rating: pg-13, ship: suho/yifan

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anonymous November 11 2015, 16:15:00 UTC
This story was too cute >.< I loved everything about it from the Cinderella theme to yifan's dorkiness and the antics of luhan and baekchen! Thank you so much for this<3

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nereid_nymph November 26 2015, 07:26:12 UTC
thank you so much for the comment and for liking this story! <3

p.s I apologize as I noticed that my layout was changed a bit when I submitted this, making difficult to differentiate the scenes when they changed and it was difficult to read.

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Ser Pounce anonymous November 12 2015, 05:55:16 UTC
where did ser pounce go?~
i just noted some spelling errors here and there, but i enjoyed it! i bursted out laughing when yifan ate the cupcake whole he probably has huge chompers. also xiuhan & baekhyun are double pluses! yifan likes big boobs to fill his huge hands, sorry for ya fellow because junmyeon doesnt have boobs but im pretty sure he's extremely pretty in dresses haha. i love how you put in there that junmyeon felt free as a girl haha suho mentioned that in exo second box!

sending my love for you authornim with baekhyun's fairy dust~~

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RE: Ser Pounce nereid_nymph November 26 2015, 07:30:17 UTC
ser pounce jumped in an other dimension and became Tommen's cat from Game of Thrones. Poor thing, he didn't realize what the got himself into.

Sorry for the errors, I noticed three errors when I read it too. English is not my native language, same with my beta, and we were both stressed from exams when I wrote this, so I apologize.

Thank you for your lovely comment and for enjoying this story, I send you baekhyun fairy dust too! <3

p.s I apologize as I noticed that my layout was changed a bit when I submitted this, making difficult to differentiate the scenes when they changed.

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anonymous November 13 2015, 06:26:35 UTC
hey author-nim I want to leave a dead mouse on your pillow too not because I'm tired of you but because I like you haha!
Junmyeon must look so fluffy changing hair colors~

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nereid_nymph November 26 2015, 07:33:37 UTC

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anonymous November 16 2015, 03:33:59 UTC
The concept of Junmyeon's hair color changing with his emotions is so intriguing! I'm really interested and inspired by this idea hehe. I also liked the Cinderella touch, and all of Junmyeon's relationships with his friends and his bosses etc were really lovely and funny to read about. This was very enjoyable, incredible work!

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nereid_nymph November 26 2015, 07:36:20 UTC
thank you so much for liking it! I got the idea of his hair changing colors by the movie aquamarine, where there is a mermaid and her nails change color depending on her emotions :D

Thank you for your comment!

p.s I apologize as I noticed that my layout was changed a bit when I submitted this, making difficult to differentiate the scenes when they changed.

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nappeungijibe November 20 2015, 02:43:49 UTC
greetings, my dear authornim.

i found that this story deserves much love for all the efforts you have given - the world building, the colour changing hair, everything. i like that you managed to give such vivid picture on this galactic universe setting and i have to say that its not hard to imagine it at all. and those references on earthlings fictions are just perfect.

again thanks for this brilliant piece authornim. hope you will keep on writing.

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nereid_nymph November 26 2015, 07:38:16 UTC
THANK YOU SO MUCH, I am a new author and I needed to hear this so much T.T

Thank you for liking this, I enjoyed writing it too <3

p.s I apologize as I noticed that my layout was changed a bit when I submitted this, making difficult to differentiate the scenes when they changed.

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