DAY FOURTEEN ★ somewhere it hides a well

Nov 21, 2015 21:55

Username: bluedreaming
Prompt #: Original Prompt
Title: somewhere it hides a well
Ship: Sehun & Yifan (father & son)
Side ships: Kai/Unnamed Woman (broken), Sehun & Tao (friends), Baekhyun/Yang Zishan, Baekhyun & Yifan (friends), Kai & Yifan (coparents?)
Rating: PG
Word count: 9,860 words
Warnings: minor character death, implied depression, briefly implied ( Read more... )

day 14, *fanfiction, ship: sehun/yifan, rating: pg

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soft_wallnuts November 23 2015, 04:55:31 UTC
*throws buckets full of love at you* What have you done, this is so great I don't even know what to do. Or say. Because I'm just so full of feelings right now. <3

I love the characters here. Love them. How they are so genuine and how they're all starting to heal together, slowly, yes, but still healing. The sweetest child Sehun, broken single dad Yifan, soft-hearted little Tao (with Candy~), young puppy-like Jongin... Sehun's definitely my favorite here though. He's so precious. <3 The way he cares for everyone, how he's wise beyond his years and tries so hard for others. And the narration! The narration is wonderful. I don't even know how to explain it, but I really, really like it. It makes everything come alive in a way that it's almost like I'm watching a film at back of my mind. ^^

Honestly, I was going to beg for more of this AU. I knew it before I was even halfway through this fic. Like, eff it, even they somehow all die at the end I'm gonna beg you to resurrect them and write more of this 'verse. :D And then you go and mention this will become a small series? Oh, how I love you right now! <3 Thank you~ ^^

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