DAY FOURTEEN ★ somewhere it hides a well

[yifantasymods]

Username: bluedreaming
Prompt #: Original Prompt
Title: somewhere it hides a well
Ship: Sehun & Yifan (father & son)
Side ships: Kai/Unnamed Woman (broken), Sehun & Tao (friends), Baekhyun/Yang Zishan, Baekhyun & Yifan (friends), Kai & Yifan (coparents?)
Rating: PG
Word count: 9,860 words
Warnings: minor character death, implied depression, briefly implied

Comments

[xxhna]

This touched me. A slice of life? It felt so real. Probably because somewhere out there, someone is going through this too. The characters... I have no words to explain how they made me feel. I felt so sad for Kris. But Sehun is so very young and very strong. He is a precious child with a big heart. And Jongin too. I hope he is able to smile and be happy. I hope they will all be happy.

(i had to comment again when i reread this)
about sehun's character...i think you captured the nature and wholesomeness of children. he is so pure and naive yet quite despite his age. you know that idea that children's thoughts are intentional and pure? they say things on their mind and do things in regards to it. they don't dance around issues, they address it directly. honestly, i am floored and impressed by him. his feelings and actions are so thoughtful and full of love. he is so observant of his surroundings and the people around him.

this broke me omg;;
"I'm sorry," he whispers into his father's ear. "I wanted to draw you flowers like Mommy's flowers so you can smile again."