The Winner
Title: The Winner
Author: ygwildchild
Pairing: Seungyoon/Taehyun
Rating: NC-17
Genre: smut
Word Count: 1,730
Disclaimer: This story is my work. Fiction.
Summary: Seungyoon could not take it anymore when Taehyun said that he was the winner.
Author's note: Based on this event. This is for all those (s)inner circles that asked me to write kangnam smut on ( Read more... )
First, there aren't many smut about Kangnam (like... almost none, i've counted three including yours and mine LOL) and it's hard to find a good smut anyway... but I really like yours!
I liked Taehyun's reason to say that thing at the concert and how he was jealous (hahha) of Seungyoon (ok that we're delulu, but really, why he said such a thing?! in real life!) ... you gave it a good reason. And then I loved how Seungyoon wasn't really angry at him, and... well, they way the talked to each other, in general, was so cute and they're so in love!
I liked how you placed the smut well in their regular life, you know, in a realistic way. (like they didn't have sex because they were too busy, but sometimes the passion is too much XD)
And of course I liked how you wrote it hahah it was hot and passionate, what can i say more? hahah i really liked it and you write it well, that's it. I don't have other words for it besides hufehfuehuf8hh.
(and I loved how sneaky Taehyun is, bringing lube with him and demanding Seungyoon's winner buahahaha)
And the last part was fun, really, it close the fic perfectly :)
Basically, I really enjoyed it and I'm happy you wrote it, the fandom needed it u__u
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