Made For You

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TITLE: Made For You
PAIRING: Massu/Shigemi
RATING: PG
WORD COUNT: 7,382
SUMMARY: After years of avoiding the trend, Massu is given a mannequin -- a lab-made pseudo-person.

Comments

[crazyfaucet]

Wow... just ... wow! This is really something... i'm mesmerized completely! I was engaged throughout the whole piece and I love how you played out Shigemi and Massu. Simple and delicate. Nothing over powering. (i didn't feel like i was watching awkward!Massu or goofy!Massu, which i quite enjoyed A LOT). Just simply beautiful. I'd have to say the relationship you created with Ryo and his Mannequins has got to be my favourite!

"Pi crouches on the floor, and feels almost guilty about what he's going to say, like there's some kind of mannequin confidentiality agreement. But, more than that, he knows Ryo would be upset if he knew he'd been lied to, and to Pi, Ryo will always come first. " I love this image most of all and how dedicated Pi is to Ryo. You've even taken a different side to Yamapi that i quite enjoyed reading ^^

"A nurse walks into the examination room with a tray of syringes and needles. The mannequin frowns and scoots away on the bed." I liked this line a lot too ^^

Everything was so elegant and i'm glad Shige(mi)/Massu got their happy ending too ^^ I love all your work thank you so much ^^