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Talk All You Want, Honey, But You'll Be Waking Up In My Bed

Aug 05, 2010 13:07

TITLE: Talk All You Want, Honey, But You'll Be Waking Up In My Bed
PAIRING: Ryo/NEWS, with some TegoShige, KoyaPi, MassuShige, ShigePi, KoyaTego and MassuPi
RATING: R
WORD COUNT: 4,175
SUMMARY: Ryo finds a way to really bring NEWS together. Sequel to Who Needs Words When You've Got A Body Like That, and yes, you should probably read it first.

( Talk All You Want, Honey, But You'll Be Waking Up In My Bed )

#one-shot, @news, r: r

Comments 4

juniority August 5 2010, 20:18:04 UTC

I never commented on "Who Needs Words When You've Got A Body Like That", so I'm taking the chance now to tell you that I thought it was amazing and hot. Especially the piercing thing.

Reading this sequel made my day. Scratch that, it made my life. I LOVE Ryo as the maestro, orchestrating everything to maximize his and his groupmates' pleasure.

And the scene with Koyama discovering Pi's piercing... It cannot be normal how sexy I think that is.

If I was the kind of person that kept a list of my favorites fics, this fic would be on it. I'm not, so it isn't, but you should know that if I did, it totally would be.

crazyfaucet August 6 2010, 01:56:21 UTC

I really liked the sequel, espeically the ending and how careful Ryo was when following through with his plan. The ending being by far the best part of the whole thing ( well other than the koyapi/ tegoshige bits ^___^)

It was awesome ^____^ ( i enjoy your work immensely)! Thanks

sanjihan August 8 2010, 02:47:45 UTC

This was a very nice continuation of the last and I liked how you kept the same sort of feel but expanded it. My favorite part was probably the scene where Tegoshi intrudes and Ryo had to put him in his place and poor Koyama. :( I really liked that Ryo knew when to push and when to sit back.

"I'm being careful where it matters, so stop. Being. Whiney."
<3

Also... when I saw KoyaTego in the pairings list I might have squealed a little. <3 I get excited even if it's only implied, lol. But the KoyaRyo was more than implied and I am a happy woman. XD

Thank you!

lastingdreams8 October 21 2010, 16:32:27 UTC

"I'm being careful where it matters, so stop. Being. Whiney."
AWWWWWWWWW, that is the cutest, sweetest thing! *squishes Ryo*

I think you captured the essence of Ryo -harsh in his decisions/actions, but actually just looking out for his members.
I also love how this takes a new spin on 'member love' and how everyone got so close, lol ^^
Definitely enjoyed all the various pairings :D