An Obstacle: PGnightr0seOctober 8 2008, 02:41:00 UTC
Bella Swan is not attracted to Jacob Black. She can't be. She's too busy being hopelessly in love with a corpse to pay attention to stupid things like how smooth the skin of his hands is or the way his lower lip trembles when she breaks his heart for what has to be the seventh time that day or that his feet are twice the size of hers and you know what they say about guys with big feet and...
Okay, Bella Swan is attracted to Jacob Black. But she's not in love with him. She belongs to her vampire, heart and soul and body. It's not like she can let the little things like the joyousness of his laugh or the gentleness of his touch or the way his lame jokes are actually funny or the way he can see her thoughts better than her mind-reading ex-boyfriend or that he still hopes in his smile, hopes someday the love will be enough
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Re: An Obstacle: PGnuits_froidesOctober 8 2008, 02:44:23 UTC
omg. this was beautiful and perfect. and just guhh. PERFECT.
Jacob Black swam across a really wide Egyptian river and a mountain made of heartbreak but he slew the dragon (that she wove for herself out of hate and fear) and he brought home the girl and in the end nothing else really counts.
Re: An Obstacle: PGbluesuzanneOctober 8 2008, 02:54:11 UTC
GNYAHHHH WIN WIN WIN.
Jacob Black swam across a really wide Egyptian river and a mountain made of heartbreak but he slew the dragon (that she wove for herself out of hate and fear) and he brought home the girl and in the end nothing else really counts.
ALKSJHDFKJH *flails, see this is how it's supposed to be. Also really adored the structure of the story.
She touches her lips to his chest because it's the highest thing she can reach and he laughs and laughs
Re: An Obstacle: PGnightr0seOctober 8 2008, 11:20:28 UTC
yay i killed you. :D it's really only fair considering how many times you've killed me. i think there were seven or eight occassions during "then direct you" alone.
Re: An Obstacle: PGap2187cpOctober 8 2008, 04:21:58 UTC
awww... this is so cute. i absolutely love it, but the ending totally did me in, "Jacob Black swam across a really wide Egyptian river and a mountain made of heartbreak but he slew the dragon (that she wove for herself out of hate and fear) and he brought home the girl and in the end nothing else really counts." good job. :)
Pairing: Jacob/Bella
Prompt: Not just a river in Egypt
Rating: Whatever you like, just gimme gimme gimmeeee
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Okay, Bella Swan is attracted to Jacob Black. But she's not in love with him. She belongs to her vampire, heart and soul and body. It's not like she can let the little things like the joyousness of his laugh or the gentleness of his touch or the way his lame jokes are actually funny or the way he can see her thoughts better than her mind-reading ex-boyfriend or that he still hopes in his smile, hopes someday the love will be enough ( ... )
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this was beautiful and perfect.
and just guhh.
PERFECT.
Jacob Black swam across a really wide Egyptian river and a mountain made of heartbreak but he slew the dragon (that she wove for herself out of hate and fear) and he brought home the girl and in the end nothing else really counts.
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yay!!!
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Jacob Black swam across a really wide Egyptian river and a mountain made of heartbreak but he slew the dragon (that she wove for herself out of hate and fear) and he brought home the girl and in the end nothing else really counts.
ALKSJHDFKJH *flails, see this is how it's supposed to be. Also really adored the structure of the story.
She touches her lips to his chest because it's the highest thing she can reach and he laughs and laughs
This detail? I die now kthx.
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it's really only fair considering how many times you've killed me. i think there were seven or eight occassions during "then direct you" alone.
anyway, thank you!
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i wasn't going to include the ending, but i'm really really glad i did, since everyone likes it.
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