Sanctuary - Chapter Eight
Title: Sanctuary
Chapter: 8/?
Authors: renichifreak and yeonah
Fandom: SS501
Pairings: KyuMin, HyunSaeng
Rating: PG-16
Warning:Angst, AU
Summary: In this era, people are bought and sold as though they are cattle. The human life is only worth what one is willing to pay for it. What happens when two such people end up in the possession of two ( Read more... )
Chapter: 8/?
Authors: renichifreak and yeonah
Fandom: SS501
Pairings: KyuMin, HyunSaeng
Rating: PG-16
Warning:Angst, AU
Summary: In this era, people are bought and sold as though they are cattle. The human life is only worth what one is willing to pay for it. What happens when two such people end up in the possession of two ( Read more... )
You know, I was on the phone with my 언니 when you updated and it was so funny 'cause I actually told her at 11:10, "She has an hour. No, wait, less than an hour," and 내 언니 was like, "What on earth are you talking about?" and I replied, as if it was the most natural thing, "This friend of mine, she writes these stories I'm unhealthily addicted to and she updates on Wednesdays."
I hope school's going well, though, Yeonnie~ *hugs*
Another thing I told 내 언니: This chapter was NOT betaed, so you might find several mistakes, I'm sorry >.<;;;
When I read that I whined to 언니, "I'll be their beta~~~," and then, after thinking it through, added, "But they probably wouldn't let me ㅜㅜ" I figure, if I'm this bad now, I'd just be worse getting peaks at the upcoming chapters.
As for errors caught, just this one: You know that you would have laughed if it was me of Joonie.
This chapter was too short ㅠㅠ
I think I complain of that every week, though.
More of their mum's backstory came in on this one, like:
No one had played it for years though.
14 years in fact. -and-
She enjoyed stringing him into weird hairstyles more than he liked, but she was the only mother figure he had left.
That stylist ajhumma was pretty awesome, not gonna lie.
One of the things that was in my last comment that got lost was on this line, Music was his one and only passion, and he'd always kept his love for it hidden so his former masters wouldn't find a way to take it away from him. I feel that Youngsaeng's making some considerable progress in believing Hyunjoong. I mean, it may not yet be, like, quantifiable progress, but he's definitely making more progress than Jungmin.
Speaking of Jungmin! That scene when Kyujong quickly exited the salon - big scene right there! It got interrupted, with was uncool, but, yeah, big scene. *points to:*
About to call out, he paused when he noticed the stance his master was in. Blinking, he took in slightly hunched body, and the shaky rise and fall of his shoulders with the breath he exhaled.
It was familiar.
Yuppers, big, exciting stuff right there~
JungMin shook his head, baffled when he realized that they were actually being taken out to eat. He was used to scraps, not something with an actual price tag attached.
YoungSaeng was just as confused as JungMin. "Um, whatever, I suppose," he said finally.
KyuJong noticed the reactions. "Don't be so surprised. You're both too damn thin, so expect to have food ordered for you."
My poor boys :'( But Kyu and Hyunjoong will treat them right^^
I think I'm finished :D I'm getting tired -┍
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Yush, sorry for the late update LOL. Yesterday was my last day of school and I spent the whole day working on my portfolio until like...6:30pm, then went out with my friends for dinner to celebrate, then came home around 10:30 and had to get stuff ready for a job interview the following morning xD;;; So I was just...all over the place LOL.
And Eli 언니 (I totally didn't know it was spelled that way, thank you!!) reminded me on Twitter and I only saw it around 10:45 and was like...crap. LOL
I'm working the following weeks until school starts late January, so I'll only be able to update after dinner when I get home, just to let you know so you're not checking all morning/afternoon for an update xD;;;
Hehe, if I post much more in the update, Livejournal won't let me post it xD;;;
Reading your comment before my job interview this morning made me in a good mood <3333 Thank you for reading and commenting~~~ <333
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And, is it safe to assume your job interview went well if you'll be working for the next month or so? Or was that for a second job?
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It's actually for a school externship next semester xD It went decently, I hope I get to work at that place for the externship. It looks like I'm going to die of overtime, but should be fun XDDD
Is your school just about done?
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What's the externship?
And you're not horrible with comments! I'm pretty bad at replying to them in time, though~
Um, I've got three finals left - Monday, Tuesday, and Thursday of next week. Then I'm free 'til the fifth when classes start up again. I am so done with this semester. It went pretty awfully, but I have high hopes for the next. :)
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