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yeolmonster

One Jar of Happiness [1/3]

Feb 23, 2013 23:58

Title: One Jar of Happiness
MyungYeol, slight!WooGyu (if you squint your eye past the greasiness)
Rating: PG-13 (for sexual references, very troubling, yes.)
Special Warnings: Silly humor and a horny Lee Sungyeol
Summary: Myungsoo decides that Sungyeol is an alien; because in his head only aliens have breasts on their knees.
Author's Note: I've ( Read more... )

chaptered, comedy, general, myungyeol

Comments 35

penny_lane_42 February 24 2013, 00:51:25 UTC

GIRL YOU'RE BACK. AND WRITING DUDEBRO!YEOL. I LOVE YOU. YEOL IS SUCH A DUDEBRO. People forget that because he's so damn pretty.

who’s less glowing, less funny and less graceful, is the Lee Sungyeol only Myungsoo knows (yes, okay, other group members know that too). And for better or for worse, he likes him a lot better without make-up, eternally inside his coffee cup and forever hungry, neurotic and cranky. For no reason at all. Probably because it’s a side of him that he can keep to himself, and not share with a humungous batch of girls that like him because he’s tall or funny or has a mole on his neck.

LOVE.

Myungsoo’s palms always get sweaty, and his heart races against his ribcage restlessly. His stomach clenches and sometimes his toes itch and curl up. There’s also this lightness, like tingling in his fingertips; that feel a lot like something magical and beautiful that he cannot explain verbally.
Dongwoo says it happens because Sungyeol gives him constipation.

HAHAHA DONGWOO YOU TROLL.

“How can we possibly date someone ( ... )

yeolmonster February 24 2013, 06:48:07 UTC

lol, dudebro!yeol xD
Didn't realized that was what I was trying to describe - but boy I like the sound of it. :P

Ugh, I can't help but to agree with you.
I mean, the guy wanted to be in a dress in troublemaker just so he could troll us with his chest - I couldn't even picture him girly if I wanted to... all those pretty muscles.
Myungsoo understands my pain

( ... )

cierra_james February 24 2013, 02:45:06 UTC

0.0 wow, that was awesome!
A slow build up from a joke to some thing more real without them even realising. Very very cleaver writing there.
Though did you have to throw in such an evil cliff hanger ending?
I shall wait patiently for the next chapter.

yeolmonster February 24 2013, 06:52:10 UTC

kekeke! Thank you!
It's going to get weirder from here on! ;~;
The only thing I'm good at are cliff hangers, lol xD

Thank you so much for reading and leaving a reply!
There will be a chapter before you know it! One week passes in a blink of an eye!

SHE'S BACK! SHE'S BACK! SHE'S BACK, OH! prince_smutty February 24 2013, 03:01:32 UTC

After reading the author's notes at the beginning, it got me a little hesitant to proceed. I'm not particularly fond of a manly Sungyeol and a girlish Myungsoo relationship dynamics because I think it beats the essence of Myungyeol. With such considerations, there are great chances that the character might go far too off-character, BUT SINCE IT'S YOU i'm more than willing to give it a try. I was once deeply in love with your comic dialogue skills for making conversations and snarky banters ( ... )

Re: SHE'S BACK! SHE'S BACK! SHE'S BACK, OH! yeolmonster February 24 2013, 08:04:04 UTC

Well, hello there!
Wow, it's been quite long! You kinda disappeared on me, man! (I actually got a little worried, but I'm neurotic, so ignore me)

DUDE
DUDEEE
DUDE, I never said anything about Myungsoo being girly (that's disgusting, man, I would never.)
Myungsoo is just a little overwhelmed, but once he'll catch up to Sungyeol it'll be hilarious. It's just not very easy to comprehend he likes sungyeol that way - although it's glaring obvious for everybody else ( ... )

Re: SHE'S BACK! SHE'S BACK! SHE'S BACK, OH! yeolmonster February 24 2013, 08:20:09 UTC

pss.
I want to be that chicken lol

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yeolmonster February 24 2013, 08:09:27 UTC

I LOVE YOU TOO
(EVEN THOUGH YOU DON'T UPDATE YOUR FIC AND MAKE ME SAD :( )

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yeolmonster February 24 2013, 10:30:59 UTC

wait.
what message? :\

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anhlee0718 February 24 2013, 04:02:25 UTC

sjd;glksjgl;kdjfglsdjfg. dies at another myungyeol
FUCKKKK SO CUTE. SDLFJS:DLJF. FLUFF IS SO FLUFFY

Omg, i'm good with manly Sungyeol as long as at the end of the day, Myungie tops :D (that's just my opinion guyssss!)

prince_smutty February 24 2013, 05:06:49 UTC

Sorry for shamelessly intruding but allow me to interject an AMEN to that!

*clears throat*

"AMEN to that! You've perfectly worded my thoughts." *screams I love you to you*

once again, let me apologize for being shameless. SORRY.

yeolmonster February 24 2013, 08:10:14 UTC

Would you calm down!
He's going to top anyway, sheesh! I would never let him bottom Sungyeol! NEVER!!!!
It saddens me that you would think of me as the kind of girl who will let Sungyeol top anybody besides Sungjong (even in Sungjong's case, I'm not very sure if he tops. It's difficult.)

yeolmonster February 24 2013, 08:06:34 UTC

Myungsoo always tops >:D
Unless Sungyeol will throw tantrums and make a scene, and then Myungsoo will have to sigh, and agree with whatever he wants from him because it's like dealing with a child, really. A really big, cute, child.

:D Thanks for the comment! You're always so nice to me... ;~;