YOUR BEATS BEAT MY HEART for EVERYONE

Aug 28, 2014 19:00

For: ☆EVERYONE
Title: Your Beats Beat My Heart
Pairing (s): Chanyeol/Kris
Rating: PG
Length: 4,832
Summary: Chanyeol is easily fascinated about everything.
Author's note: I don’t think I do your prompt any justice. This is a mess, I’m sorry. Thanks for mods to put up with me, seriously. And lame title is lame.

There are so much more interesting things to do in this world other than watching his co-worker. )

rating: pg, 2014, pairing: kris

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parkbyun August 31 2014, 03:10:15 UTC
oh i like this very much! the story is really sweet <3
i love how you picture Chanyeol, Kyungsoo, Yifan, and Yixing(!!!) in the story. it's pretty much how i picture them in real life, too. i love how you build Chanyeol's character here;; how he's still heartbroken and afraid to begin a new relationship because of his last one. it's so realistic and PAINFULheartbreaking. i can feel his pain;; huhu poor guy. and don't even mention the side pairings...xiuhan and sooxing (laysoo?) damn i like it ouo Yixing can be so aggressive sometimes ha ha ha SOOOO unf ;u;
but this is my most favorite part from the story:

“I really love your new record,” Chanyeol says. “I feel spiritually connected to your songs.”

“Thank you?”

“Especially ‘The Cherry Compote Across Your Lips’,” Chanyeol continues. “I don’t even know what that song is about but I love every single note in it. I feel like I’m the guy in that song, wanting to lick the compote off his crush’s lips.”

“That’s good, I guess,” Lu Han guffaws. “I don’t even know what’s the meaning behind that song. Yifan wrote it.”

“Really?” Chanyeol directs his gaze to the vocalist.

Yifan looks uncomfortable at best. “Well, yeah.”

“Wow,” Chanyeol sighs out. “That’s amazing.”

“Is he alright?” Minseok questions Kyungsoo, eyeing Chanyeol’s dazzled expression cautiously.

“He tends to be dreamy sometimes.” Kyungsoo tugs at Chanyeol’s hand more insistently. “Come on, dude. Let’s get you home.”

“I’ll watch your next show!” Chanyeol promises as his fierce friend tags him away. “And your show after that, and after that!”

“Damn, you’re weird,” Kyungsoo grunts when they are walking out of the aisle to the main street.

Chanyeol doesn’t care.
Chanyeol why are you so cute

the way he wants to see the top of Yifan's head and when Baekhyun visits him and wiuasdhas;lkdaisdaidhashd kill ME
it's so painful but it's really good ohmygooood;;;; i love how a less than 5k story can turn me into an emotional mess like this :c
you're amazing. i hope more people will read and comment here.
thank you for this wonderful piece<3

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parkbyun September 8 2014, 07:14:06 UTC
UNDESERVING YOU SAID...??? gasps
girl please this is awesome and so emotional and I'm so in love with this. please don't derogate yourself like this!! :o
you're an amazing writer and you need to know that <333
I wish I had written more on the comment but that was all I could say because this fic is plain awesome and this is on my top 3 from YPD. I'm not lying.
PLEASE WRITE MORE<3333333 saranghae and what's your Twitter or Tumblr? I wanna follow you ^3^

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