this was completely amazing, one of the best chansoo fics out there. you say this is the first time writing chansoo and didnt know how their dynamic worked, i actually think that worked to your advantage bc whatever this dynamic is written here is a rare one and ive enjoyed it thoroughly. i actually think you captured how chansoo can be irl better than some chansoo writers (sadly myself included). i absolutely loved how playful and confident dks is. this is very rare in chansoo fics and i wish theres more written like that bc i do believe he is a lot more playful away from public's eyes and that he does tease yeol a lot. i loved every single dialogue written here. esp chansoo's obviously. you have a way of making conversations really really interesting and fun to read. i love them a lot. A LOT.
i cannot begin to compliment you on how well dks and yeol were characterised. they both seem like really lovely people and they really have chemistry between them. yeol is so dumb and im glad dks is gracious enough to forgive him time and time again, and be cool about it. like, it takes so much to wack someone who you really liked but rejected you at the back of the head when you accidentally meet them again. dks is so cool and so brave. have i told you how great and refreshing your characterisation of dks is yet? i dont think i can ever stop.
im so happy this fic is written, that it exists and its bc you wrote it. if you ever decide to write more chansoo, id feel blessed with the grace of god to read them.
i absolutely loved how playful and confident dks is. this is very rare in chansoo fics and i wish theres more written like that bc i do believe he is a lot more playful away from public's eyes and that he does tease yeol a lot.
i loved every single dialogue written here. esp chansoo's obviously. you have a way of making conversations really really interesting and fun to read. i love them a lot. A LOT.
i cannot begin to compliment you on how well dks and yeol were characterised. they both seem like really lovely people and they really have chemistry between them. yeol is so dumb and im glad dks is gracious enough to forgive him time and time again, and be cool about it. like, it takes so much to wack someone who you really liked but rejected you at the back of the head when you accidentally meet them again. dks is so cool and so brave. have i told you how great and refreshing your characterisation of dks is yet? i dont think i can ever stop.
im so happy this fic is written, that it exists and its bc you wrote it. if you ever decide to write more chansoo, id feel blessed with the grace of god to read them.
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