All the times I held you (and yet you still didn’t come to me) for vvipforseungri

Jul 29, 2015 22:32

For: vvipforseungri
Title: All the Times I Held You (and yet you still didn’t come to me)
Pairing(s): Chanyeol/Sehun; mentions Chanyeol/D.O, Chanyeol/Kai,,& Chanyeol/Chen
Rating: NC-17
Warning(s): language, mature content, cheating
Length: 3.2k
Summary: Chanyeol’s always dreamed of the perfect love and through many trials and many errors, he fails to see that ( Read more... )

rating: nc-17, 2015, pairing: sehun

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anonymous July 30 2015, 02:20:01 UTC
SCREECHIN THANKS AUTHORNIM I'M LOOKIN AT THOSE PAIRINGS AND I'M WAILING ALREADY OK OK LET'S GO

"Good lord," Chanyeol rushes out
do u know me irl??? THATS ME I SAY GOOD LORD i AM chanyeol!

PCY PLEASE STOP USING UR BELOVED AND UNIMPRESSED SEHUN TO HANG YOUR AVENGERS BOXERS SEHUN IS ALREADY TOO GOOD FOR YOUR UNGRATEFUL ASS

KSOO IS SMILIN SO WILDLY FOR HIS DATE SEHUN IS BOTHERED BY IT!!!!!

dumped the whole bottle of cologne ARE YOU HAGRID, PCY? STOP

the loneliest sound oh my gooood SEHUN MY LITTLE SON WHO HAS TO KEEP WATCHING HIS LOVE BE ALL EXCITED TO BE WITH SOMEONE ELSE I'M CRYING IT'S THIS PROMPT

FIRST DATE AND UR ALREADY GOING AT IT FUCK U PCY HAVE SOME CONSIDERATION YOU BARELY EVEN KNOW KSOO.... SEHUN WATCHING.....

(edit: i read further oops i assumed it was a first date but IT'S WORSE IT'S ESTABLISHED R/S SMDH KSOO)

???? pcy???? donuts do not make up??? for ur shit???? also u brought baekhyun so i feel like! u keep bein an ass! oh my oblivious child...

COUSIN??? HUH????? KYUNGSOO YOU LITTLE DEVIL YOU PLAYING WITH PCY'S HEART SEHUN AND I ARE DYINGGG YOU DON'T DESERVE CHANYEOL!!! BAeksoo i love them BUT KSOO?? HAD THAT WIDE SMILE SMDH UGH

wow... baeksoo??? fuck u guys?????

OHHH YOU FUCKED UP!! PCY LAY IT ON HIM GTFO U GROSS PPL!!!!

UGHHH CHANYEOL WHO IS SO FUCJING CUT UP, THIS KEEPS /HAPPENING/ TO HIM GOSH AND SEHUN!!! HAS TO JUST STAND AND WATCH!!! SEHUN IS THE RIGHT ONE

OHHHHHH JONGDAE!!! WOW CHANYEOL YOU LITERALLY CHOOSE THE FUCKING WORST !! JONGDAE HOW COULD YOU, YOU ASSHAT!!!!

fake

god the lapslock killed me chanyeol.... my poor baby....

jongin slinking in like he has ANY RIGHT and pulling chanyeol away oh my GOD

EWWWW PCY WHY COME ON MAN UR BETTER THAN THE BATHROOM AND GOD SEHUN CAN HEAR IT AND JESUSSSSSS

the little bits of lapslock are killing me, lifeless he's just so fucking drained and distraught and god sehun you deserve so much more than this

and yet here he is, despite being in fucning constant pain, taking care of a passed out chanyeol on the couch oh my god and he sees the EVIDENCE right on chanyeol's neck and it's too much but

BUT CHANYEOL YOU HAVE NO FUCKING RIGHT TO ASK HIM TO STAY BUT SEHUN. SEHUN DOES, HE ALWAYS WILL, HE'S NEVER LEFT, HE'S ALWAYS BEEN THERE CHANYEOL WHY CAN'T YOU SEE THAT?

god and chanyeol and the grip he's got on sehun's wrist and he wonders why but it doesnt bother him, oh god, it's not an issUE and he's so fond of this kid, knows him so well so WHAT if he's drooling? and it feels good, doesnt it chanyeol, to carry sehun to bed, to take care of what's yours FUCK

wishes the moment would last forever because it feels RIGHT feels GOOD this is what SHOULD BE of course chanyeol wouldnt mind sehun snuggling!!! OMG OF COURSE HE WOULDNT IT'S SEHUN, SEHUN WHO'S NEVER EVER HURT HIM , ALWAYS BEEN THAT SOURCE OF COMFORT

how have i never noticed this??? BECAUSE YOU DONT QUESTION A GOOD THING, BUT NOW IS THE TIME CHANYEOL

"How have I never noticed how beautiful you are?"

MY HEAAAART DON'T YOU DARE MOVE SEHUN LET CHANYEOL REALIZE SHEEEER INTIMACY!!!

KISSES, SOFT KISSES THAT GET CLOSER AND CLOSER AND FEEL SO RIGHT, SIMPLE SWEET KISSES

MY

SWEET

SEHUN!!!!!!!!!

NOOOOOOO "HOW MUCH LONGER DO I HAVE TO WAIT?" MY HEART BROKE FOR SEHUN YES IT DID

THATS RIGHT CHANYEOL!!!!!!!! THAT'S EXACTLY IT FINALLY

NO MORE WAITING SEHUN CHANYEOL HAS SEEN THE LIGHT AND IT IS YOU, YOU WHO TREATS HIM RIGHT EVEN WHEN HE DOESNT DESERVE IT!!!

ahh thank you thank you author!!! i loved this so much oh my goshhhh!!

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vvipforseungri July 30 2015, 02:20:52 UTC
why did this post as anon???? sorry omg

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darkhorse1397 August 4 2015, 20:30:46 UTC
This has got to be one of my favorite comments ever! Lengthy comments are my favorite comments! Strangely you do remind me of someone I know, but I'm not sure I do know you irl, but that would be cool haha! Anyway, I'm so happy that you liked your fic!

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