Dear future boyfriend for unfinishedwing

Jul 27, 2015 20:09

For: unfinishedwing
Title: Dear Future Boyfriend
Pairing(s): pastChanyeol/Sehun, [Spoiler]futureChanyeol/Kris, +Sehun/Tao
Rating: PG-13
Warning(s): dialog heavy
Length: 6.5K
Summary: Chanyeol writes an advice column for his university's newspaper, replying to letters about student concerns, lost connections, etc., but refuses to reply to the letters that appear to be ( Read more... )

rating: pg-13, 2015, pairing: sehun, pairing: kris

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unfinishedwing July 31 2015, 20:26:44 UTC
dear fic writer, (ha)

i love it! adkfjas;dkjf i loved how you kept me guessing until the end who the secret admirer was -- i had my guess (acting major and linguistics minor ha!), of course, but you threw a couple of red herrings in there which kept me on my toes and made it fun. (at some points of the fic i was "wait???? is it jongdae????? oh wait-- jongin????" hahaha.) and then in the end--! my favorite ship! i'm very glad that i didn't click on the spoiler tag before reading haha.

jongdae is a gem in this, he seemed true to how he's like irl c: my favorite line of the fic was his: "This is a cat cafe. Pet the cats, not each other." i laughed at that lololol. i also really enjoyed the dialogue between yoora and chanyeol, their sibling relationship was ;u;

and you basically put everything i had written in my prompt/application, wow!! i think combining the advice columnist prompt and the pet prompt worked out great. (the way kris sent the last letter to chanyeol via the cat was soooooooo cuuuuuuuuuuuute i died.) even gayeon's appearance lol i'm impressed that you managed to fit everything. the effort was truly appreciated!! ;u;

thank you for writing this fic for me!!!!!! ;u;

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canadaphile August 4 2015, 03:35:54 UTC
Dear fic prompter,

I'm so glad! I wanted to try a different approach, and it was honestly between this and an established relationship that just had them kind of being cute and goofing off, using those column letters to openly express their feelings while being "anonymous." I like what I did here more, I think. It was more fun looking at your list and trying to figure out how I could include everyone.

Jongdae was my favourite part of this whole fic. No lie. He's probably the only person who knew what was going on the whole time. Yoora should have been in there more, just because what better person to moan about possible crushes to than your loving big sister? uwu But I kind of just let her go, which I do regret. That dialogue was really fun and nothing like any siblings I'm personally familiar with.(My brother and I are not even remotely close to that kind of relationship. Kind of glad.)

You're very welcome! I had fun. Looks like you had fun reading it. We're good; I'm pleased. This is even longer than my usual fic attempts, so you have a greater representation of my blood, sweat, and tears, here. ;;w;;

=^..^=~

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unfinishedwing August 5 2015, 02:15:48 UTC
ooooh! the established relationship scenario had not even occurred in my mind when i thought of the prompt haha that would have been a nice twist! but i like what you did here as well c:

i agree, i think yoora's dialogue with chanyeol was the most fun here! i kinda like to think that their relationship in reality is kind of like that, they seem pretty close -- so the dialogue you wrote was very believable!!

oh i forgot to mention i liked the taohun on the side too hehe.

i indeed had fun reading it (and it was a good length!!), thank you again!! ♡

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