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Symptoms for ordinary_days01

Jul 20, 2015 21:46

For: ordinary_days01
Title: Symptoms
Pairing(s): Chanyeol/Baekhyun
Rating: NC-17
Length: 4.9k
Summary: Chanyeol has an addiction. and it comes in the form of campus rockstar byun baekhyun. college!au.
Author's note: hopefully this is what you wanted, OP! ;n; i apologize if i got a little carried away with what little smut there is oops.

( a cold, blustering wind still finds space beneath the jacket clinging tight to his body )

rating: nc-17, 2015, pairing: baekhyun

Comments 8

ordinary_days01 July 21 2015, 04:03:38 UTC

i'm just gonna spot this now. i'll properly comment later~~

ordinary_days01 July 30 2015, 17:03:20 UTC

omg sorry for the SUPER LATE COMMENT but since i finally found the time, i shall properly give my thoughts....

it's not really much i have to say other than the fact that i COMPLETELY LOVED IT!! i wish it was longer ;_; even though there wasn't baekyeol smut like i was expecting, i wasn't disappointed. i really liked how the story was kinda suspenseful (like i honestly wasn't expecting baek to be all shy and cute around yeol. actually i didn't think they'd even sorta end up together tbh) and not so typical?

I JUST LOVE IT SO MUCH!! THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS FOR ME OMG YOU ARE PERFECT

p.s. i loved jongdae's character so much, esp the texts he was sending yeol at the end <3

raijuuthunder August 4 2015, 13:20:03 UTC

now i feel like i should've written baekyeol smut..........lmao |D you asked for not too much smut tho so i decided to play it on the safe side that's my excuse uvu but i'm glad you liked it and that i managed to make it surprising even though i sort of felt like it was predictable but that's prob just because i was writing it laughs

YOU'RE THE PERFECT ONE THANK YOU FOR LOVING ME.

and yes jongdae was my favorite too he made the fic tbh

chanquins July 24 2015, 03:14:13 UTC

NUUUUU I DEMAND MORE HOW COULD YOU END IT LIKE THAT :( :(

raijuuthunder August 4 2015, 13:20:30 UTC

BECAUSE I'M A LAZY PIECE OF POO WHO DID THIS PRETTY LAST MINUTE..................orz

park_noodle July 27 2015, 16:35:14 UTC

Well, normally, I'd be upset by the shortness of the fic and the caps lock but huh, actually it's very, very good just the way it is.
Simple, yet to-the-point and really well-written.
Thanks a lot for sharing. Your fic deserves more love!

raijuuthunder August 4 2015, 13:21:40 UTC

wow, thank you! ;u; i'm so used to writing in caps lock for roleplaying sighs i need to remember to actually capitalize things when i do fics from now on looks off

sorry for the shortness as well ;; i would have liked to make it longer but it's been so long since i wrote fic & also i was doing this way closer to the deadline than i should have oops
thank you for reading! ;; it means a lot that you decided to comment <3

anonymous November 17 2015, 04:13:17 UTC

Sooooooooo exciting and mature chosen word (i'm not referring to the mstrbtn scene at all okay) but it's really made me curious about the end. You can't just end it this way :( SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEEEWWLLL