Scintilla for bluedreaming

Jul 20, 2015 21:27

For: bluedreaming
Title: Scintilla
Pairing(s): Chanyeol/Sehun, slight!Kai/D.O
Rating: PG-13
Length: 7.7k
Summary: Chanyeol doesn't know what changed.
Author's note: Thank you E for reading it through and making sure it's decent enough.

Love used to feel amazing. )

rating: pg-13, 2015, pairing: sehun

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bluedreaming July 21 2015, 01:18:48 UTC
SPOT SPOT SPOT

Edit: I absolutely LOVED this - the story the flow the feelings were beautiful - and the hope at the end, not an answer but a new question - perfect. I'm sorry I can't leave a proper comment right now due to deadlines but I'll be back! Thank you so much for writing this!

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gellis813 July 21 2015, 23:52:04 UTC
Great story! This was so well written! Pls excuse me while I go deeper than I want to go.....
In most relationship a person can only see their point of view. They can never see their own flaws. It was interesting to see Chanyeol come to terms with his flaws. And I'm glad Sehun accepted his part of the blame because if he had communicated his problems instead of letting it fester...then things could have been different. That's why communication is always important. Im glad you ended with the possibility of a new beginning.

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bubblewoo July 22 2015, 09:58:58 UTC
I love this a lot, this was very well written and it tugged at my heartstrings. I'm so happy that the ending is a new beginning, another chance for the both of them to start over. Thank you for this!

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yuraxchan July 28 2015, 15:57:44 UTC
I loved this so much ;-;
It broke my heart, because they suffered a lot and love isn't supposed to hurt right? But you also piece me back together with the happy ending ♥
I kinda wanted to be mad at Chanyeol but i couldn't, he's painfully human and raw, and at least he tried to make it right. It must have been hard, it's easier to just look away and let go after all. But he still chose to fight and in the end if Sehun came back i guess he realized it too, he believed in Chanyeol's love and sincerity. It must have been hard for Sehun too, to leave, to admit he didn't love Chanyeol anymore -- what he became, what Sehun became because of him -- in his face and then to come back and to trust him again.

Your story is a beautiful lesson of love, it's very realistic and full of hope.
((I also love how your portrayed KaiSoo <3))

Thank you so much for writing this ♥

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seyeol July 31 2015, 03:27:24 UTC
I'm so heartbroken that the ~happy ending~ did not heal my wounds. BUT I LOVE THIS SO MUCH even if it hurt like hell.

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