i had to do a double-take when u wrote vhanyeol'erection wilted on the first drabble, from that, i assume chanyeol likes to be manhandled roughly?? i dunno but whatever, your style of writing is very different and has this painfully, beautiful ugly realisticness into it(sorry, did that even make sense) so yeah... that was yet another bomb
on the second drabble :
"The hand Baekhyun has tightly fisted in his hair yanks and Chanyeolâs head follows, tilting back to ease the pain. His eyes are still tightly shut, mouth open as he pants to catch his breath. He hears a spitting sound and feels something wet and warm fall into his open mouth. He should be disgusted, but his head is swimming and a pleasant warmth is threading down his spine. Whimpers float out of his mouth as a foot moves up to nudge at his dick through his basketball shorts."
THIS. FUCKING THIS. THIS is the next sexiest thing i've ever read ever since Maayacola's "smell like marijuana and women's perfume" to describe gdragon's scent in one of her fic. you are a level of a fucking genius fanfic writer.
on the second drabble :
"The hand Baekhyun has tightly fisted in his hair yanks and Chanyeolâs head follows, tilting back to ease the pain. His eyes are still tightly shut, mouth open as he pants to catch his breath. He hears a spitting sound and feels something wet and warm fall into his open mouth. He should be disgusted, but his head is swimming and a pleasant warmth is threading down his spine. Whimpers float out of his mouth as a foot moves up to nudge at his dick through his basketball shorts."
THIS. FUCKING THIS. THIS is the next sexiest thing i've ever read ever since Maayacola's "smell like marijuana and women's perfume" to describe gdragon's scent in one of her fic. you are a level of a fucking genius fanfic writer.
and of course chanyeol belogs to baekhyun XD
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screams. lmao you're too nice! I'm glad you enjoyed it! A lot of ppl hate spitting u_u
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You're welcomed :D
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