I AM SCREECHING (well I would be if I weren't in the library. I went to the library to do work and promised myself I would read this after I did said work but your writing just pulled me in entirely and now I can't start work until I pour all my love and guts on you sorry sorry sorry) from their very first meeting, their relationship developed so organically and the DENTED RAMEN CUP and DAE TREATING JAE AND ENDING UP OWING HIM and can I just say I have absolutely fallen in love with the idea of starving writer Jung Daehyun because DAEFATTY.
Their bonding is so nice and Jae living at Dae's and not paying rent and all the /SNARK/ and /UNICORNS/ and HOLDING HANDS UNDER THE RAINBOW DOODLE. Dumb bros being dumb is just about my favorite thing in the entire world. Your style of writing is so concise and the voice is perfectly spastic and augh sorry I am just throwing up my adoration on you.
Muahahahahahahahaha...
ψ(｀∇´)ψ AHHHHHHHGH. (the parasite line I died x 100000000)
the balance between showing and telling, I loved how it bounced back between the sarcastic dialogue and the really pretty narrative /rolls, and also I LOVE SLOW DAE HE IS SO CUTE AND HE'S JUST LIKE OH. OHHHHHHHHHH. AND FORGETS THAT THEY'RE NOT ACTUALLY BOYFRIENDS. OF COURSE. The line about happiness--Daehyun’s never known happiness like this. / There doesn’t seem to be a reason to write in his journal anymore. I love love love that. So. Much. GAH. Sorry all I am doing is making gurgling noises at you.
I WAS GETTING VERY EMOTIONAL BY THE END AND I WAS LIKE PLEASE FIX IT WHY NO HELP and then of course perfect dumb daejae is perfect. PERFECT. Sorry for spewing my emotions at you. I loved this and thank you for writing it, you did an awesome job, please take my soul its worth is somewhere between Dae and Jae's ;A; ♥
Their bonding is so nice and Jae living at Dae's and not paying rent and all the /SNARK/ and /UNICORNS/ and HOLDING HANDS UNDER THE RAINBOW DOODLE. Dumb bros being dumb is just about my favorite thing in the entire world. Your style of writing is so concise and the voice is perfectly spastic and augh sorry I am just throwing up my adoration on you.
Muahahahahahahahaha...
ψ(｀∇´)ψ AHHHHHHHGH. (the parasite line I died x 100000000)
the balance between showing and telling, I loved how it bounced back between the sarcastic dialogue and the really pretty narrative /rolls, and also I LOVE SLOW DAE HE IS SO CUTE AND HE'S JUST LIKE OH. OHHHHHHHHHH. AND FORGETS THAT THEY'RE NOT ACTUALLY BOYFRIENDS. OF COURSE. The line about happiness--Daehyun’s never known happiness like this. / There doesn’t seem to be a reason to write in his journal anymore. I love love love that. So. Much. GAH. Sorry all I am doing is making gurgling noises at you.
I WAS GETTING VERY EMOTIONAL BY THE END AND I WAS LIKE PLEASE FIX IT WHY NO HELP and then of course perfect dumb daejae is perfect. PERFECT. Sorry for spewing my emotions at you. I loved this and thank you for writing it, you did an awesome job, please take my soul its worth is somewhere between Dae and Jae's ;A; ♥
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