Singing Rain [2/2]

[yeolcarp]

Title: Singing Rain
Rating: PG
Focus/Pairing: Daehyun/Youngjae
Words: 7000+
Summary: Youngjae's iPhone app shows no forecast of rain.

Comments

[akmongs]

omg this was so cute ;~~~~;

i love daejae but i don't usually read fics of them, but i read a couple of yours already and this was really lovely and beautiful!! i really like the idea, i suppose the prompt included dancing in the rain, and your writing fit it so well!! the fic starts slowly and then grows, just like the rain, and it gives a really nice, relaxed, feeling

your descriptions and details of the settings were amazing (the rain, the street lights reflecting on the wet pavement) and i appreciate how spontaneous if not out of the blue daejae's relationship builds kkk, i don't know i really love this sort of stories where despite being strangers two people seem to fall together and fit like puzzle pieces

i love daehyun's character. i think for a b.a.p writer characterizing daehyun is the funniest part (i had a chance too and it just worked so well) and here he's so carefree and loud and he never stops talking, just like in real life, i felt immediately attached to him (he's also kind of an idiot, bc last time i checked i wouldn't recommend anyone to swim in the ocean during a storm y'know) i really liked youngjae too, how his character develops in the span of a night, and he lets himself and his judgement go the more time he spends with daehyun, so sweet~

some lines that i really really liked

“Stranger?” he gasps, “My names Daehyun and you’re Youngjae. What more is there to know?"

Daehyun tells Youngjae his whole life story in the span of five minutes (maybe even less). this was probaly my favorite part, it's something that i can picture so easily

He hears Daehyun laugh before feeling his wet bangs being moved aside and a kiss placed on his forehead. FOREHEAD KISSES ARE THE FLUFFIEST I-!!!!!!!! ;_________;

“Hey, man. Only one kiss a day and I already gave you CPR.” he jokes. /spazzes, i would have liked another kiss tho i'm a sap

overall i really loved this, so cute and sweet and beautiful, i'm glad you didn't give up on the abandoned fic and decided to rewrite it! ♥

(but they totally got pneumonia the next day)

[yeolcarp]

this comment is so long, I don't deserve it ; ~ ; I'm glad you enjoyed my fic \o/ and yes the prompt I got was a song fic prompt lol. Daehyun is everyone's favorite character to write for reals, right next to Himchan. Hell. All of B.A.P is so dumb and fun. Your kind words make me so happy, really thanks for them :) and yes they got pneumonia and a cold but they can just cuddle that away <3