Once and Always Champion (5/7), an Alice in Wonderland fic

[yappichick]

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[just_a_dram]

Aliceness! Well, I loved the Aliceness :)

"Frabjousness, his Hope cheered, could be th’ beginning’ o‘ somethin’ Unimaginable between ye an’ Alice.

Frabjousness, his Fear whispered, could scare Alice awa’ from ye fer good.

Frabjousness, his Affection shouted, could keep Alice wi’ ye forever."

This is all so perfectly Tarrant. I just want to hug him.

Frabjousness is fascinating. Lots of epic goodness in here.

Mally is such a good friend, hurt though she is, she is willing to urge Alice in the right direction if need be.

[yappichick]

Yes, Tarrant is certainly huggable, isn't he? Glad you liked the Frabjousness idea...it's always fun to create mythology! :D :D

[manniness]

Thackery was out of Toe Jam? Dear me, I do not want to know what else is in Upelkuchen!

And I love that you've make Stayne's weakness a tart. It's so quirky and cute and it very nearly makes him a sympathetic character just from that detail alone! (Duuuuude. Awesome.)

Chess just loves being helpful, doesn't he? Here he is explaining The Situation to Alice while Tarrant emotes a little ways away. (And I haven't forgotten how helpful he was in the previous chapter when he offered to suggest a name for the emotion Tarrant was feeling! L.O.L. I love your Chess. He and Tarrant play off each other so splendidly!)

And Mally: "Miss Your-Eyes-Are-Purple" Bwhahahahaha! (I can't remember if that was in this part or the last one, but I LOVE IT!!!!)

[yappichick]

LOL, no, you don't. There is a reason why Thackery keeps his recipes away from the masses. LOL

Chess and Tarrant are made of win. LOL They are a ton of fun to write...especially together. :D :D

Yeah, Mally does have a bit of snarkiness, doesn't she? LOL