Avoidance, an Alice in Wonderland fic

[yappichick]

Category: Angst, Romance
Pairing: Alice/Tarrant
Rating: T
Summary: He didn’t understand it. It was almost as though Alice didn’t want to see him.
Author’s notes: Curse these blasted plot bunnies! Don’t they know I’ve got a Big Bang story to try to figure out! *tries not to panic* As always, reviews are tastier than candy (and much less caloric!).

Comments

[just_a_dram]

"Welcoming you back to Underland"

What a perfect ending :) His correcting her regarding his name was great. I also enjoyed his fleeting thought that she could pin him.

I also really liked the Hatterism: "And that thought was more unbearable than improperly brewed tea."

Yes, you have a Big Bang to write for, but I enjoy your one shots. This helped me put off getting back to work!

[yappichick]

I'm glad you liked it! It kind of snuck up on me and I just had to write it. LOL And yay for stalling you from work! LOL

[rumielf]

*happy sigh* You just made my stressful afternoon much less so.

My mind will now wander off into fantasies of the rest of that "welcome".

I did especially like the line about his lips, his hands and his heart. Lovely. :)

(and i have to agree with just_a_dram on the Hatterism)

[yappichick]

Tee hee, I'm glad you enjoyed it! :D And, hooray for making an afternoon less stressful! :D :D Thanks so much! :D

[manniness]

Take!Charge!Tarrant... Oh, my. You write him so well. I've got a LURVLIE visual of him "caging" Alice against the wall. Whoo... boy! And the kiss was WONDERFUL.

The correction on his name...

The last line...!!!

*dies of fangirl complications*

I love your one-shots, sweetie. They're like a dark cherry danish and cup of tea.

[niphuria]

Absolutely delightful! Yes...the idea of her pinning HIM was just so...smexy Tarrant! Oh, now I wish I had thought of that line! :)

Seriously, wonderful story!

[yappichick]

Why thank you so much! And yeah, I don't think Tarrant would mind that one bit, LOL. :D :D

[yappichick]

Well, you know, after writing a couple of one-shot where he is innocent!Tarrant, I thought I should give that man some Muchness himself, LOL

And thank you so much! *beams*

[fiducia]

Guh! Dude! This is wonderful!

Love how Tarrant isn't pining for her! Love how he's assertive and helps her find her Muchness when it comes to him again. Love the dialogue! LOVE THE BROGUE!

Love it all honestly. If you see fit to write more in this vein I'd love to read how their first tea goes. ;)

[yappichick]

Dude, thank you! :D :D Yeah, I thought after writing a couple of one shots with him being innocent!Tarrant, he needed a jolt of Muchness. LOL

Hmmm...first tea...I'll see what my Muse can do. :D :D

[monnihaukka]

I love when he tells her his name, just like that : D You can really feel the heat of the moment there!