[Fic] Saiyuki:Release

[scribblemoose]

Title: Release
Fandom: Saiyuki
Rating: MA
Pairing: Hakkai/Gojyo/Sanzo
Word Count: 4,661
Request: Sanzo x Gojyo x Hakkai: When a group of 4 guys are traveling that long... they have to release their tension somewhere. But, along the way, Sanzo notices that he is being left aside of the action... [Note: First time, no angst please (at least, not the

Comments

[nekojita]

Oh my. *fans self* That was so wonderfully hot, but I think I loved the little details the most. Like Sanzo deliberately seperating Gojyo and Hakkai because he's in a bad mood, and Hakkai's disapproving bows, and the Goku masterbation scene, things like that. ^.^

[scribblemoose]

Thank you very much. I'm glad the approach worked - it's been a while since I wrote anything structured this way. :)

[louiselux]

Mmmm, so very hot! *g*

I really enjoyed Sanzo's progression from thinking of sex as nothing to do with him to it being something he can use to feel better. That seems so very in character to me. I liked the hints and glimpses of what Hakkai and Gojyo were doing, and the tension that created, and poor Goku! I really felt for him.

Ridiculous fucking kappa. Only Gojyo would say....

I really loved that line!

[scribblemoose]

Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.:)

And I'm glad you liked that line - I wasn't sure it worked so yay! I'm pleased it did.

[wordsofastory]

Oh, nice. I liked this.

[scribblemoose]

Thank you. :)

*big smile*

[babaca]

Boy Howdy! That was... Well that was indeed. ^___^ Funny, hot, and very cool. Well done!

Re: *big smile*

[scribblemoose]

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

[emphasas]

love the building of the tension and the final (for want of a better word) release

[scribblemoose]

Thank you! I'm pleased you liked it. :)