Saiyuki [Hakkai/Gojyo] - Senses Working Overtime

[devikun]

I'd like to preface this with 'I'm sorry', mainly because I can't write porn, but also because of naff titles, grammatical murders, lack of Beta and OOC-ness. This is my first ever attempt at really real porn (as in thin plot devised in order to contextualise smut) and even now I'm wondering what madness possessed me when I can't write porn, but I

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[tadity]

Okay...so I'm going to just faint from the hotness for awhile, and maybe later, when I'm able to think (because my brain has melted into a puddle of goo, you see), I'll have something constructive to say.

Gods, that was so good.

[devikun]

hahaha! Thanks! I made sure to write it after Santa arrived, or he might have thought me naughty rather than nice. ;)

[chiad_frostfur]

Well... damn! *wanders off to ponder ways to get you to write more stuff that you think you can't*

"when I can't write porn"

If you'll pardon my language, bullshit! I love your writing style, and your characterizations.

(Can I assume that was his limiter Hakkai was referring to in the first paragraph? If so, I think he should it off more often!)

[devikun]

I blush at your compliments ^^ Thanks heaps!

Yes you can assume it was his limiter he was referring to. I decided I didn't want to state it 'cause I figured people would work it out and it was only a lame plot device anyway.

[indelicateink]

That... was so perfect. PERFECT. I think you can forget those "I can't write porn" qualms utterly and completely, because you CERTAINLY CAN, the kind that spontaneously sets my hair on fire.

Mmmmm. I love the sensuality of this piece. And Hakkai is so wonderfully in-character. Plus, the way you describe Gojyo makes him sound so incredibly tasty. (You know, even more so than I'd previously thought.)

So wonderful. The perfect combination of funny and smutty and sensual. Guh. Thank you!

[devikun]

Ah. Thanks so much for the praise!! I was having Major Ethical Issues about the fact that Hakkai would never jump Gojyo so early after his trauma, but then I thought; meh, it's smut. I'm over-thinking it, and that was that. Tasty = Gojyo (and visa versa). It's the real curse of the hanyou. Perhaps in fact, hanyous started that rumor about Sanzos being tasty just to, you know, misdirect everyone. Luckily Hakkai is not so easily fooled. ^^

I'm concerned for your hair though.

[indelicateink]

Yeah, it's a concern. I've read this through three times now and it's all baldness and singed-hair-smell over here. But totally worth it.

I was having Major Ethical Issues about the fact that Hakkai would never jump Gojyo so early after his trauma

Hee, oh I think that is well explained by Hakkai getting carried away on his tide of raw animal lust. *fans self* Besides, the scent of a hanyou will do strange things to you. ♥

[devikun]

*lights incense, claps hands together and prays for the Neo's soul*

Honestly Neo-chan, it came as a surprise to me too. I wasn't holding out. Really. And sorry about the hobbling thing.

And, err, well, if you can't find your composure, what colour is it? I'm pretty sure my cat was batting something around earlier that might have been what you're looking for...

♥ ^^

[hibem]

Oh. Mmmnh. Yes. Love!

[devikun]

Why thankyou Hibem ^^